Can someone double check this for me?

inye sána inya Lótessë nië talat mi melmë

I looked up the words individually; supposivly meaning
"I think I may be falling in love"

i think.. help?

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sadly the only word I know in that sentence is Melme which is Love or Loves... meleth in Sindarian

sorry I couldn't help more I really need to work up on my elvish

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The waves that C R A S H E D upon
The R O C K S that you were trying to step along

And in my head I heard them play a S O N G

atleast I got one word right

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Good for you haha I am sure the rest is right, it seems like a good translation, but then again not very good at elvish

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The waves that C R A S H E D upon
The R O C K S that you were trying to step along

And in my head I heard them play a S O N G

One thing i should mention is that Lotesse means May the month, not may as in may be. I know that's an easy mistake to make. As for the rest, I can't be sure of all of it, since I don't know as many words as i'd like to. (I'll have to work on my vocabulary. )

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