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Post subject:  Posted: September 26th, 2006, 6:36 am |
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(lol, this is supposed to be you guys' moment...but okay...)
Katherine went to her mother "mom, are you okay?"
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Post subject: Posted: September 27th, 2006, 1:16 am |
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(OH....ok then, I just thought it would be nice to have you all involved...)
Kim placed her hand on Katherine's shoulder. She stood up slowly...her legs felt numb.
She shook and trembled with shock and stared into his dark black eyes. Those innocent, loving eyes...."Ed...ward..." she said outloud.
Suddenly, she felt a stabbing pain in her chest. Her gaze dropped to the carpeted floor and she let out a horrifying groan. Her knees gave way and she crumbled toward the floor clutching her chest.
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"GRANDMA!!!!!" Lucy screamed. She knelt down next to Kim and screamed, "GRANDMA! GRANDMA!"
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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2006, 2:45 am |
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Timothy said, "Lucy, don't ge-" he glanced back to his mother-in-law for a moment. He saw her unconscious.
He forgot about the dangerous-looking man standing in the doorway, and ran over to the old women's side. "Kim? Oh my God...Kim! She's not breathing!"
Edward gasped as he searched the room for the girl. "Kim?"
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Kim lay in the warm, fleece blankets of her hospital bed. Wires and tubes were stuck into her, as if she were pincushion. Her eyes were closed, peacefully, her mouth was curled into a smile, and Kim's silver hair spilled over the stiff, white pillows.
Katherine was holding her withered hand and caressing it. Timothy sat at the end of the bed, with his usual worried expression plastered on his face. The room was cream-colored and warm. It smelled of hospital food and plastic, and the glow of the lamps and electric lighting had been dimmed.
Kim was close to death, and yet she looked happy. She had been ready for the Grim Reaper for a long time by now.
Dustin Lilly and Lucy were outside sitting on a soft grey sofa, waiting to be called into the room.
Edward, to the reluctance of Timothy and everyone in St. Joseph Hospital, had been allowed to come to Kim at her time of death. The children had insisted that he come along, and Kim had called out for "Dear Edward..." many times in the ambulance. So, the decision was made for him to come.
The nurses were wrapping his scissors tightly in cloth, so that he wouldn't cause so much alarm. He had tried his best not to move his fingers. The young nurses glared at his scissorhands, with a sick, disgusted face.
Edward had his head bowed. He felt like someone had scooped out his insides and left a gap. He was trembling, and he wanted more than ever to cry. He didn't care about the stares and whispers anymore. His only concern was if Kim was going to live. He didn't even recognize her, she'd changed so much, but he still loved her. As his inventor had put it so many years ago, "Love is blind, Edward. It never bothers about looks. Not real love."
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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2006, 6:42 am |
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Katherine looked down at her dying mother....she seemed soo happy....yet katherine's tears stained kim's face
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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2006, 4:46 pm |
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Lucy sat outside of the hospital room with Lily and Dustin. Tears slid silently down her face....she knew that grandma Kim was probably going to die.
Peeking her head around the doorway to the room, she watched Edward stand near Kim. She saw her mother crying and this just made Lucy cry more.
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Kim's eyes opened slowly as she stared directly at Edward. Her heart leap for joy to see him there with her. He had not abandoned her. "Hi..." she said softly to him. She reached out with her left hand for him. It shook weakly.
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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2006, 5:04 pm |
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Those minutes waiting were the longest Edward had ever lived. Even after decades living alone in the quiet of his desolate House, he had never felt time go more slowly...it all faded away when she said, "Hi"
Suddenly a tall, bland doctor in a white coat with a stethoscope dangling carelessly around his neck walked up to them. He was wearing large bottle- glass glasses, which made his hazel eyes magnify. His hair was a dull brown and his face was as plain as paper.
The man stopped infront of Kim's door and checked the chart he was holding under his arm. Tthe doctor gave a particularly cold, disapproving glare at Edward, and he shook his head, solemnly.
"Sir," The doctor said, in his nasal, drone of a voice, "We can't allow you into the room. The patient might be startled."
Edward frowned, helplessly, and opened his mouth to say something, but nothing came out. Whatever Edward was going or trying to say, was only expressed in his eyes.
Sir," said Timothy, looking up at the doctor, "Edward'll be careful. I think he'd die if he doesn't see her..." he gave a sarcastic glare towards the young man.
The doctor's straight, stiff face relaxed. The doctor looked to the timid thing that stood before him.
He finally cleared his throat and walked out of the the room, gently closing the door behind him..
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2006, 2:35 am |
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(WHOA LONG POST PIP!)
"Edward...come closer..." Kim said quietly as she continued to reach out her hand for him. "I want to see your face again," she said lovingly. Kim did not have her glasses on and could not see far away, but the sparkle in her dark brown eyes appeared, once again, since she now had her Edward.
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"HEY!" Lucy shouted angrily at the doctor. "Don't shut the door! I want to see my grandma!" Her lip quivered sadly.
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2006, 2:40 am |
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He was pale as the snow, his hair as wild as any winter wind, and his eyes as black as coal.
Edward Scissorhands was there, like a lost childhood doll, he looked just the same. A bit dustier, dirtier, perhaps, but still young, innocent, and wide-eyed. Edward's two sparkling eyes, like two bright stars, stared at Kim, lovingly.
He looked so much the same, and she was shriveled, wrinkled, and wasting. Edward gazed at the old woman. The face that stared back looked like it had once been Kim's face, but it had been scrunched up and crinkled. So, now it was only a ghostly, enchanted outline of an angel.
His smooth, colorless face smiled, tenderly. He started coming towards her. Anyone could hear him coming. It was hard not to, he always made that chiming, clicking noise when he walked. That familiar scene of cookies and ice scented the room.
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2006, 11:58 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 12:19 am |
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Kim grabbed a hold of Edward's hand....now that it was safe to. She wanted him to come so much closer....she wanted him to hold her....Edward was her first love...and of course now, her last.
"I've missed you so much. I thought I would never see you again. I'm so sorry that I could not be with you...." tears filled her eyes and she blinked continuously.
"Please...." she pleaded, "come closer, Edward."
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 7:07 am |
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katherine, shocked and saddened at this sight, pushed edward very gently toward the bedside
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 8:42 pm |
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(Waiting for Edward or anyone else's pose???)
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 8:46 pm |
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The young scissor-handed man came closer to Kim. His breathing was soft and gentle. The black leather suit squeaked each time his chest rose.
She was as beautiful as he remembered, her hair, though no longer the golden gloss, was a stunning silver, her eyes still shone a pale glory in the moon light, and her smile was sweeter than he had ever seen it.
He didn't need or want to talk. It was just fine staring at her.
Kim had the feeble, worn-out look Edward's inventor had displayed the day before he died. It was a sign of death, and Edward knew it all too well.
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 10:42 pm |
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Kim touched Edward's face softly. Nothing had changed about him....his personality....his face....his eyes....everything she had loved so much about him. "I want you to know that I will miss you when I'm gone. Please take care of my daughter, Katherine, and my grand daughter, Lucy...." Kim said sadly. "Love them the way you loved me," she said as a tear ran down her wrinkled cheek.
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 10:46 pm |
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Faint-hearted Edward, the shy phantom loomed next to her. "...please don't fall asleep..." Edward's voice was cheerless and painful.
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 11:00 pm |
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More tears trailed down Kim's pale face. She hated to hurt Edward....just like she did so long ago when Jim made her steal from his house. Memories floated back to her and her eyes turned away from Edward. "I'm sorry...but I think I must go to sleep soon."
Her brown eyes then turned back to meet his..."Everyone must sleep sooner or later, Edward." Her breathing was now shallow and her eyes were glazy.
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