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Post subject:  Posted: May 16th, 2006, 3:49 pm |
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The world was spinning and slowly Jack seemed to lose conciousness. He slowly opened his eyes to look at Margaret through the hazy blurr of his vision, focussing on her eyes in order to have something of reality to cling on to. But he can't help it. He feels the exhaustion and immense pain washing over him again, and before Jack knows it, he slid onto the ground. Unconcious.. Blood still running down his back, and his breath shallow.
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2006, 3:56 pm |
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((Would it be too soon for Margaret to kiss Jack?))
Margaret ripped a small pece of clothe from her pants and dipped it int a small puddle in the corner and proseded to wash Jacks wounds, from the whipping and gunshots.
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2006, 4:01 pm |
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(On the cheek no..on the lips yes.)
Even in his dreams though.. Jack doesn't find peace. Over and over again the events that caused the slashes on his back repeat itself in his mind. How he got pulled out of the cell. How he heard Margaret scream, and was soon thrown into a sepate room. The anger.. all of it.
The guards push me into a dark room. They shove me into a wall that is steined with blood. I raise my chin proudly, bravely challenging them. Bravely.. aye. I even threaten what will happen to them the second tables will turn. But my pride and courage is soon put to the test, after they request me to remove my shirt. I do so, half-aware of what's coming but still undoubted.
I'm turned around to face the wall. My hands are clapsed in chains. Even then I am sure that the guards will never recall this moment as of me being scared. Quite on the contrary, I try my best to be the very picture of flamoyant nerve. For once my hands don't wave or wander. For once my grin isn't cocky or ironic. For once I stand still, and I close my eyes as I hear the guard ask a whip behind me.
Inside though, there's a huge knot in my stomach. And at the words of the guards, the knot get yanked just a little tighter. And the second I realize exactly of what's to come, I have to fight the content of my stomach from rising, fight to keep from vomiting.
Without warning, the guard suddenly brings the whip down, roughly slicing the skin of my back. I feel a heat emerge from the spot, and blood starts to drip down. I close my eyes tighter.
A long series of whipping later, I'm down on my knees, shaking, pained, and fragile like a child. I feel as if all dams have broken, the only thing that keeps me from breaking down is the power of my will. Every whip tears more of my skin, and the more I become weak. Then a last time, the whip comes down on my back and a scream escapes my lips.
Jack jerks awake suddenly, screaming.
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2006, 4:08 pm |
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Margaret jumped as Jack woke screaming. "Its Ok Jack. Your back in the cell." She held him not touching the whip marks. "I'm here, Margaret's here." She whispered, kissed his cheeks, and stroked his hair.
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2006, 4:17 pm |
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Jack looked around the cell frantically, untill his gaze fell on Margaret and he felt himself calm down. "Wha-..?" he murmered, confused. Slowly he started to realize that it was a dream. Though the pain in his back that's creeping through every limb in his body, and the hot blood still falling out of his wounds is now is very real indeed. A memory then....reality now.
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2006, 4:23 pm |
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"Its ok Jack. Let me finish cleaning your wounds." She scontiued to clean even though Jack would wince in pain. Soon she was done moved she was in from of Jack. "Better now?" she asked. Out of the corner of her eye she could see the rope she had made into a noose, just in case.
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2006, 4:29 pm |
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Jack's face grimaced in pain. His eyelids felt heavy, they wanted to close again, but he kept fighting them back, afraid that if he did close his eyes, they wouldn't open again. Jack then tried to talk, but the pain in his dry throat was so intense that his voice could only speak in a whisper, "We...we have to get out of 'ere.."
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2006, 4:37 pm |
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Margaret nodded. "I know." And her eyes fell onto the noose, If they couldn't escape physicly, and worse things were to happen, then they would leave another way. Margaret was so caught up in her thoughts she didn't realise Jack had seen the noose.
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Post subject: Posted: May 17th, 2006, 12:48 pm |
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((Pip, I was thinking when Jack and Margaret are married, at some point she could get pregnant but loose the baby. Just a thought.))
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Post subject: Posted: May 17th, 2006, 4:31 pm |
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(Whoa, that's way ahead of where we are at now. Ha ha! Let's just wait until that moment arrives..savvy?)
Jack looked at the noose and stared at it with glassy eyes. He suddenly knew Margaret's reasoning for that, and Jack's eyes looked away back to the ground. He took in shallow breaths, focusing only on his breathing and remembering to keep his eyes open. Jack had never been in such pain in his life, and it was all coming onto him too fast..
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Post subject: Posted: May 17th, 2006, 11:45 pm |
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((Sure.))
Margaret looked at Jack worrried, she knew a recipie that took a few herbs that eased pain, she had made it for the crew many times, but here in the cell it would be impossible to do, unless... She got up and went to the bars, she looked and saw a young guard their, they proberly thought that a young girl and beaten boy didn't need much guarding any more. "Um, Guard?" He turned. "Yes, I was wondering if I could have a few things". She listed what she needed, to the untrained in the medicines they seemed useless, which is proberly why the gaurd laughed, but agreed to get them. Soon he returned and gave them to her still laughing. she quickly mixed them up in her hands and went over to Jack. "Eat this, it will help make the pain lessen."
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Post subject: Posted: May 18th, 2006, 12:45 pm |
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Jack turned his neck to look at what she had made for him, "What...what is it?" He licked his dry lips and went to sit up some more, but he couldn't find the strength to. He closed his eyes and listened to his breathing which was now wheezing.
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Post subject: Posted: May 18th, 2006, 12:49 pm |
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Margaret helped Jack to sit up. "Its medicine, well herbs really, but it will help the pain. Please eat it." She brought it to Jack's lips.
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Post subject: Posted: May 18th, 2006, 1:48 pm |
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Jack swallowed then ate the herbs Margaret gave him. They were bitter, sour and sweet to his mouth. He cringed his face and sank back down to the floor. His eyes started to shut.
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Post subject: Posted: May 18th, 2006, 1:51 pm |
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(Sorry to appear again but Pippin, did you get my PM?)  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: May 18th, 2006, 2:02 pm |
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Margaret wached Jack carefully, she knew it would take a moment for the herbs to kick in, fortuanlly Jack was tired, and with the pain easing off he would be able to sleep. "Relax Jack, I think of a way to escape, just sleep." She looked around the cell, and tapped a few stones in the outer wall. Then to her suprise, one moved, so she marked it with her now filthy, hand.
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