((Meh's gonna post again now ^^ @Luinar, cool twist to the plot ^^Btw, is it okay if Atlantis is just like a normal island under water?))
Devina locked herself under deck until there was a massive splash, and they landed somewhere. Gingerly she reappeared on deck, glancing about wearily. Half the crew had been lost, so she was glad it hsád been a large one. Around them surrounded sea, but ahead, a little imersed in mist was a colossal island, with broken towers and turrets crumbling near the ancient dock.

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(Actually, once you're sucked into the whirlpool, you travel through a majorly large tunnel in the seafloor and pop up in a GIGANTIC cvern, with an island in the center and Atlantis on the island....)

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((Oh...then I've gone another way ^^))

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(Oh, btw, Atlantis is inhabited, but by spectors, krakens, naiads, and vampiric mermaids....lol)

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(that's okay, as long as you get there....lol There might be two tunnels, I'm not sure... And yes, you got the mist right...lol)

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Minara snarls and whirls around, striding out of the cabin and onto the wildly rolling deck. "Take cover!!! NOW, or yer all dead!!!!....."
The men dive for cover, tying themselves in place with their safety lines. The crews on the other ships do the same, the leaders of those ships knowing the drill all too well from previous storms....except that this is not just a storm. Minara turns and walks back into the cabin and drags Jack to his feet, but doesn't untie his hands, leaving him to stumble across the deck with her. She hauls him out of the cabin and to the bow of the ship, turning him to face the sea in front of the ship. "Isn't it lovely?...."

In front of the ship gapes a huge hole, like a mouth, ready to swallow them whole. The ship is riding on the crest of a wave, on the brink of being tossed into the abyss. A fey grin slides across her face as the wave falls, along with the ship, and they tilt forward, beginning the long descent. She looks at Jack, laughter turning her features as wild as the sea with a wicked sort of beauty.
"Having fun?...." The last word turns into an exhilarated shriek as the ship plummets into the Stygian gloom, whirling in an ever-tightening circle.

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Devina turned to the remanents of her crew "Bring her into the dock!" she called out, and the sailors still shaken were only obliged to do as she said. Devina turned to Chris "Welll?"

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Chris came spat blood out of his mouth as an answer, the wawe`s hit, which had thrown his trough the door was quite hard, but not bad in the end. He looked at Devina and at the crew men.

"Get to work you maggots!"

Chris said as he got up properly and looked at Devina again.

"Well what?"

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On these blood stained pages of misery
Let him call me a tyrant so cruel
Let him curse my name, but remember the truth!

Minara drops down beneath the bowsprit as the circles tightens almost into non-existency, and a wicked keening cry sounds as high-propelled air shrieks through the rigging. Her face is set in a wild laugh, her thoughts torn away in the exhilirating plunge.
After what seems like hours and is really only minutes, they stop spinning wildly and fall straight down, but the ship is still rotating slowly from the momentum of the whirlpool. With a collossal splash, the ship lands in a huge sea that's completely underground. The ship rides the waves of it's splash out of the way of the next ship to come down, and the third ship comes down a moment later, barely missing the second. Grinning, Minara gets to her feet, hauling Jack to his feet as well.

Spread out in front of them is a huge expanse of water, all underneath a domed roof of stone, naturally vaulted and tiered, like some great cathedral. The ship floats through mist, which is tinged with a slight phosphorescence, giving the whole place an eerie glow. As the mist parts, a shape looms before them - an island, as still as death, and on the island is a city, with castles, spires, steeples, turrets, domes, and pinnacles reaching towards the ceiling of the cavern. The far-off walls cannot be seen, except for a slight glow that emanates from them, and the ceiling would not be visible, if it weren't covered in oddly-twinkling little lights, almost like stars.

Minara smiles and gestures with one arm, indicating the whole view, sea, island, and city, all bathed in ghostly lights. "Welcome to Atlantis, Jack Sparrow...."

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(*kills his DP(Double Post) for him*lol)

Minara looks down at the fainted Jack and sighs, hoping this isn't another of his acts. With a sigh, she turns and walks to te stern of the ship, taking hold of the wheel and praying the rudder isn't gone. It isn't, which comes as a HUGE blessing to her, but since there's no wind, she has to rely on the current of the huge sea to push her towards the island, which it does. The three ships nose up against an old, elaborately-made stone dock, and

Minara walks to the bow again, surveying the part of the city in front of them. The dock leads up a stone walkway that has odd lampposts runnings along each side with strange blue-ish-white lights dancing inside the diamond-paned tops of the posts. With a grin, she shoves her toe into Jack's side and steps back from him, wary of a trick. "Wake up, Jack... I think yore dreams 'ave just come true...."

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"Welll....What do you think of it? Atlantis." Devina gestured at the island, as they came into the dock. There was white sand everywhere, and the place was overgrown with lush green plants. "I think its beautifull..."

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