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Is this a good plot?
Yea, its very exciting! 58%  58%  [ 7 ]
Its Alright 42%  42%  [ 5 ]
Dunno 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Nah, not really 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
It's rubbish! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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PostPosted: July 28th, 2006, 10:01 am 
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" Yes as i said!" Sounder took a drink of his Mountian Dew, while still upside down surprisingly it all went in his mouth.

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"How are you going to deliver the poison?" Erik asked. "Send it in a care package?" Claire pointed out something from the window, drawing Erik' attention. Kahisan had just got out of a fairly nice Mercedes accompanied by two bodyguards. "Guys, get into your positions," Erik whispered quickly. He's came in a bit early. But it didn't matter. What mattered was, as Erik looked through the window, there was about thirty fedayeens were walking around around the hotel. Claire nodded and exited the room with Ydal and Sounder. Erik cocked his handguns as he heard the elevator doors open and footsteps. He went to the balcony and saw below him his team in the car. The light inside were on.

Erik peered inside into room 702 and saw Kahisan standing in his room as if he was thinking. Then Kahisan's eyes met Erik's, giving Erik a shock. Without thinking, he pulled his pistol and shot Kahisan between his eyes. Then he turned the gun on the lamp and shot the bulb. He quickly ran out of the room, shoving past a terrified patron.

Claire looked closely at the room with the light and saw it go off. She got out her remote and after waiting five seconds, pressed the button. A large boom could be heard and she saw a giant ball of fire in 702. "I hope Erik got out ok," Claire muttered to herself as she drove to the back exit. Suddenly shots could be heard as the fedayeen fired at the car. She swore sliently and drew out her square sub-machine gun and fired back.

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Sounder quickly got out of the building with all his things. He was keeping a star in his hand just incase and walked around like a cat, or more like an elf acctually. No one noticed him as he walked behind Ydal and Clair .

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(((waits for an oppurtunity to bring her character into RP again. . . :blink: )))

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Ok im might close the RP and start again. With new plots. Should i? :blink:

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(((If you want to, it's fine with me. It's been sorta hard to RP. . . :huh: but I think this plot's good. What would the new plot be? )))

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Keira Undómë wrote:
Ok im might close the RP and start again. With new plots. Should i? :blink:


(Aw, I like it. I don't mean to sound mean to Elwing but I really like the RP.) :(

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No, i might close it but Restart it again.

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Ok, should i close and restart with new plots everyone?

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It's getting a bit comfusing and hard to follow.

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(Nooo, I like it.) *Pleading face*

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Elenwë Undómë wrote:
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Ok im might close the RP and start again. With new plots. Should i? :blink:


(Aw, I like it. I don't mean to sound mean to Elwing but I really like the RP.) :(


(((So do I. I think it has a very good plot, and it's exiting too! :) but. . .it's up to you. . . :( )))

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((I can't keep up! I have no idea whats going on! So I'm quiting! ttfn! Ta Ta For Now!))

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^ See what i mean? It's getting too hard to follow.

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Maybe we should. We could have one solid plotline instead of hundreds of little things.

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Exactly my point.

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