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Post subject:  Posted: September 1st, 2006, 7:41 pm |
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Nessa, her arm around Mark, looked impatient. She looked down at the boy, then over at Chris. "Don't you think he needs that more than you?" she asked, trying not to sound reproachful. She could see the wound in Mark's neck and the piece of metal glittering in it. Suddenly and decisively, her quick fingers were in and out, and holding the twisted shard. She efficiently snatched the jacket from Chris and pressed it tightly against Mark's now-open wound, smiling encouragingly at him. "There now! That's better!"
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Post subject: Posted: September 1st, 2006, 8:14 pm |
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Suddenly, another shadow peered over Mark's body and the other survivors shoulders.
It was that twenty-one year old kid, the one Alex had woken up, the one who thought he was still on the plane, the one whose arm was a funny shade, the one whose headphones and CD player survived the crash, and the one who had cracked his skull open and still didn't know it.
He felt uneasy, his fingers felt all tingly, and his legs felt like the jelly he smooshed onto his bread every day at home when he was too lazy to go get something to eat.
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Post subject: Posted: September 1st, 2006, 8:20 pm |
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"Boy, nobody's looking that good," Nessa observed, with a glance at the newcomer. "And you are?" she raised an eyebrow. "I'm beginning to think people are going to pop out of the ground at the rate they're appearing."
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Post subject: Posted: September 1st, 2006, 8:20 pm |
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Mark was not expecting Nessa to move so quickly and without his knowing. He was paying too much attention to Alex....the new person who was standing nearby.
The burn and pain didn't come until after the metal was out of his neck. It felt like a thousand bees were stinging his neck. Mark began to cry outloud which made the pain worse.
As he looked up into the faces above him, through his tears, he noticed a new figure (Jimmy). Suddenly, Mark began to feel very lightheaded....the faces began to blur.....voices began to fade.....and things began to get dark.
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Post subject: Posted: September 1st, 2006, 8:23 pm |
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Nessa looked down in alarm as Mark went limp, still pressing the jacket tight against him. She looked up at the others. "Um, a little help, I'm kinda clueless here...?"
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Post subject: Posted: September 1st, 2006, 8:25 pm |
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The newcomer, Jimmy, just stared infront of himself.
Swaying back and forth like tree in the wind, and not blinking or speaking. His eyes were fixed into a gaze that could not be broken at the moment.
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 2:14 am |
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Suddenly, a huge flash lit up the area. Then a powerful crack shook the earth. Sheets of rain began to fall hard. More lightning and thunder followed. Dark black clouds covered the light of the sun. This was no ordinary storm....a more powerful one.
Mark however did not hear or see anything that was occuring with the storm. For at the very instant it struck, he passed out with his eyes half shut. The bloodflow increased and leaked through the jacket. The mix of rain and blood together changed the color of red to a dark pink.
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 4:49 am |
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Chris watched Nessa remove the metal before the boy even noticed it and smiled as she pressed the jacket against his wound.
"You did well..Maybe we should wrap it around his neck tight.. Of course not so tight he can't breath.." He looked at boy and the only thing he knew was that they had to stop the bleeding.
He turned to the newcomer, waiting for him to introduce, but when this introduction didn't came, they were all startled by lighting and the thunder which followed.
"We need to move him.."Chris mumbled, glancing at the newcomer who didn't looked really helpfull and then turned to Alex.
"Could you carry him..?"
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 11:51 am |
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Nessa bit her lip. "I think moving him might not be very safe," she said anxiously, almost shouting over the sound of the storm. "I mean, not that I know anything, but it doesn't seem as though it would be good for him." A deafening crack of thunder seemed to disagree with her and she looked down at Mark, and then back up at the others. "Okay, fine! But please, please be careful!"
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 1:09 pm |
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(um...who am i with now exatly?)
Lee was confused with everyone around and she found an sturdy tree and hoist herself up on. SHe kept her ankle bent and wrapped her arm tighter as she used the tree for support.
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Post subject: Posted: September 3rd, 2006, 1:59 am |
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The storm continued to rage on. Sheets of rain now became buckets of rain. The lightning and thunder seemed to grow stronger.
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Post subject: Posted: September 3rd, 2006, 2:31 am |
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Jimmy blinked his eyes, everything seemed to be playing in slow motion. You know, that button on the remote that made things go slower on the television when he would watch a move from the Matrix, over and over again...
His ears seemed to be fading out as well, everything sounded in echoes, even the thunder sounded far, far away.
THUMP!
Jimmy, hit the wet, muddy ground. He had fainted...
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Post subject: Posted: September 3rd, 2006, 9:27 am |
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Nessa gave a groan that couldn't be heard over the deafening thunder. "Chris!" she shrieked at the top of her voice. "Alex! Mark!"
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Post subject: Posted: September 3rd, 2006, 11:36 am |
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"We have to move him..but we need to do it with two of us.." Chris tried to shout over the loud noise of the thunder, without knowing if his voice could be heard.
He wrapped his good arm around Mark 's chest and looked up at Nessa and Mark.
"Someone take his legs... We'll come to get this guy later."he nodded to Jimmy, who'd fainted and now laid motionless in the mud.
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Post subject: Posted: September 3rd, 2006, 3:18 pm |
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Lee sighed angrily as she saw Jimmy fall and them picking up someone else. She tore off an sturdy branch from the tree and made two wobbly but sturdy crutches and she hobbled over, asking," How can I help?" The rain had washed all the mud from her face and most of the blood now stain her arm, but the rain felt good.
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Post subject: Posted: September 3rd, 2006, 5:10 pm |
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The storm now became dangerous as hail began to fall from the dark sky. They were the size of large apples and they broke branches off trees as they fell.
The wind swept through the tropical area and dropped the temperatures down about five degrees.
(Mark is still unconscious....LOL!)
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