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Is this a good plot?
Yea, its very exciting! 58%  58%  [ 7 ]
Its Alright 42%  42%  [ 5 ]
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PostPosted: July 13th, 2006, 3:38 pm 
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(Could Khatru and Ginglith be partners? I know he's the head)

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Ok, let me explain.

Darklight have captured a young girl named Marisa Cole, the daughter of a multi millionaire, we plan to torture the girl, and demand a ransom from her father, if he does not pay, we shall kill her.
The assasinations we are planning are linked to this, though we shall not kill the father.

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Anduril Vanlhach wrote:
"Well thats a pity now isn't it, sure theres nothing eles you want to tell me, like where your mother is" she said with a crule smile


"She's away in one of our holiday homes. Sometimes the stress makes her need a break from everything." Marisa said to Ydal.

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Erik and Claire ran towards the garage and after debating for a while, Claire gunned the ignition of their car. After ten minutes of driving, they reached the grim chapel of the Darklights. Erik strapped his katana over his back and checked his handguns while Claire belted her daggers. "Ready, my dear?" Claire asked.
"As always, my love," Erik replied. They got out of the car and knocked on the chapel door. "Hopefully, this isn't going to waste our time," Erik said as he tapped his fist lightly against the door. Claire smiled.

Can Erik and Claire tag along with Amber and her group?

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Sure, it will be a big group, but yes you could.

Keira heard the knocking and ducked down instantly.
"What's that?" quiestiond Amber.
"I don't know stupid." replied Keira. "Stay here."
She sprinted to the chapel entrance, 45 ACP's in hands.
She wrenched the double doors open and pointed the 2 guns at the heads of these strange newcomers.
"Who the heck are you!" she yelled, Angry Keira mode kicking in.

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(Great! Thanks Keira!)

Name:Eva de Luca
Age: 28
Gender: F
Appearance:http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c256/LuthienofLorien/chth.jpg
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History: Father was the leader of Darklight for years, she rose in the ranks until his early death, where she took over as leader of the organization.
Personality:Cold and aloof, she tends to think of only the organization, but secretly cares about the younger ones in Darklight and intends to protect them. She is a ruthless assassin, and loves the job, but is somewhat miffed that she is mostly in a desk job now, handing out assignments.
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Eva drummed her perfect fingernails on the metal desk she sat at. If anyone had been around to notice, they would have wondered how such a beautiful woman could look so cold and angry. She was waiting for something, that was obvious, and she was not happy. Finally, a young woman entered in a huff, clutching a black file marked "Confidential" . The look on the leader's face was enough to freeze a pool of lava.

"The incompetence around here never ceases to amaze me. Hand me that file Maureen." Eva held out her hand, and the girl sheepishly gave it to her. Opening it and reading silently, Maureen waited for Eva's next request patiently. Eventually, Eva looked up and said, "That is all," then went back to reading. Maureen quickly left, leaving Eva to shake her head and mutter Why I hired her I'll never know.

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Erik and Claire reacted instantly, drawing their firearms. "I am Erik and this is Claire," Erik introduced. "We are of the Death Bringers. Our leader, Janus, has commanded us to make contact with you."

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(No probs Luthien, thanks for joining! Great charrie! :) )

Keira stared at the two. Guns still raised.
"What the hell." she uttered. "Do you wish to talk to our leader?"
Keira eyed the guns, and the knifes, they were well armed. Looks like those new AK 47's could be useful after all she thought.

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"No," Claire said curtly. "What we wish is the Darklights and the Death Bringers to work together." No one except Erik knew this but that was exactly the opposite of Claire's wish. "There are people that will jeopardize both associations. If we work together, then we have a chance of defeating it. And if we don't, then all is lost." Erik smiled inwardly at Claire's ability to twist facts and the truth. If the Darklights didn't work with them, oh well. Erik and Claire could still kill the six radicals.
(See you guys, I'm going to swim fifty laps nonstop!)

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Keira stared, completely puzzled, firstly, how did they even find Darklight, it was a secret association.
"How can we trust you!?!" Keira spat. "We were a secret, now you two just appered from out of the blue! What's going on?"
Keira was angry and comfused, how dare anyone just waltz towards the chapel, asking for help.
"What the..." came a small voice from behind. Amber.
"Amber? Inform the leader we have visitors." Keira said. She turned back to the newcomers.
"I will need your weapons?" she snarled.

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Annalett, took out a hand gun, when Kiera opened the door. John had his MP3 ready, and stood behind Kiera...

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MP5 Eruraina.

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Khatru pulled the trigger, the bullet flying through the air and smashing through the target. Wood sprayed in all directions as the pistol recoiled in his hands. He smiled and pulled it closer to look at it.
"Right through the eye."
He grinned and holstered his pistol walking into an elevator and heading back to ground level. The shooting range was a very exclusive one indeed, only for high paying customers like himself. He mounted his motorbike and charged off down the road when he noticed some activity at the Chapel. He turned the bike sharply, the wheels screaching and head towards it, parking some distance away and running toward the door. He pressed his back against it and listened in.

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Eva heard the commotion from her office and left the file on her desk to see what it was about. As she came to the bottom of the stairs, she nearly ran into Amber. Without allowing her to speak, she said "Follow me, Amber," and continued to the door. Once there she saw the standoff and smiled slightly, then hid the smile once more behind a stoic face. "Put down your weapons, everyone!" Her orders were not to be ignored. "Erik Kaneshi, Claire Marielas. I have been expecting you."

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Keira heard the order, but kept her guns raised, just in case these strangers decided to outsmart them.
"Eva!" she said. "They say they are here to help us."
But Keira beleived it to be rubbish, she let the anger surge thru her, tightening her finger on the trigger, but not daring to fire, for she knew that would lead to her own death.

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Eva eyes narrowed, "They are our guests, Keira. Do show them a proper Darklight welcome." Her words were venomous, letting Keira know she meant business, but was also on her side in the matter. "We have an agreement that you do not know about, between our two organizations. They speak the truth."

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