Ok, the main plot is that a Vamp (any one can play him) is in love with my OC. But she dosen't know what he is and has just seen him now and then. (Think slight Buffy/Angel idea). But things move on, they do eventually fall in love, but other vamps try to kill them as do hunters and slayers. Also they must try to keep it secret from her frends and Family.

Name: Margaret Grant
Age: 20
Race: human
Apperance: http://www.natalieportman.com/images/mo ... etaime.jpg (But with blue eyes)

I guess I'll be the main Vamp.!!!! let me make a bio!!!!

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Thanks. Also there is no soul or no-soul with the Vamps.

so Vamps don't have no soals? and look at my bio: http://www.arwen-undomiel.com/forum/vie ... 254#376254 is it alright?

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Looks ok, but do you have a picture that you could post, also is he the one that is in love with Margaret, if so, the Personality needs to be fixed a bit. And what i meant is it not like in Buffy or angel where as a vame ethier you have a soul or you don't, your a Vamp and can help people or not, but still drink human blood if you want.

okay, lots of ?s, lets start with the firse:
1)yes, this is the one that loves Margaret, and what needs to be changed about his Personality?
2) No, I can't get a pic of him.
3)I haven't seen Buffy or Angel(well, one or two episodes of Buffy the vamp. slayer) So I really don't know what you mean. Is it that Vamps can or can't have a soal? And that some vamps help people(are those the ones with soals?) and some don't drink blood?

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Ok, I don't want to sound rude with all this or too bossy so forgive me.

1)Well we could say that his love for her starts to make him more easy to show emotions. Afterall she is suposed to be kind and gentle and a bit naive.
2) Could this work? http://www.mcheathers.com/images/GBdrac ... la_022.jpg
3)they are just vamps, they do what they must and what they want, if some want to stay good then they will, but all vamps neeed blood, where they get it is up to them.

1) how about I change it as I go? We start out when they meet, and he is like that, and eventually grows soft?
2)that pic will work perfectly!
3)Oh, now I get it!

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All is good. and the Pic is of Gerard Butler as Dracula in 'Dracula 2000'. You can start if you want.

yeah, but you created it! I say 'the creater should always start'!!! plus, I don't know how to start right now, I'm a little brain dead, lol

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((Alright.))

Margaret locked up the store, it was dead alone the street. Casually she strained her eyes to look at her watch. It was 9:30 and pitch black. Putting her keys away she made her way to the local club, not noticing the pair of eyes watching her.

((E.N. you can decide how long he has loved her and can come up with flash backs to when he first saw her if you want to also include her in them go ahead.))

(alright)

Brian watched Margaret from the shadows. The first time he had set eyes on her, which was only weaks ago, he could not stop thinking of her. She was beautiful, espesially in the dark. Seeing her close up the shop her had a flash back of the first time he'd seen her: Brian was running accross roof tops at around ten at night. He was being persued by a hunter... He lost his footing at the roof of Margaret's shop. He fell, and started running again, ignoring the pain of posibly a broken rib. He turned the corner, and there she was, coming out of the door of the club. Brian stopped in his tracks. 'hello' she said in suprise. 'hi' he said back. Brian herd the hunter yell, 'get back here you' and with one last glance, brian ran again. This was the third night he had watched her close shop. As she walked down the street, he pursued her quickley, and quietly...

(how's that?)

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((Perfect.))

Margaret walked down the street towards the club. She smiled as she started to sing one of her favorite songs. And some how it fit her in a way. "In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came, that voice which calls to me and speaks my name." She would have continued but she had arrived and casually went in.

((If I ever suggest something to further the plot and it is annoying after awhile and sounds bossy let me know because I like to suggest things that helps the plot.))

(I'm fine with that!)

Brian started humming along silently to the song, and was glad Margaret didn't hear him...

When Margaret went in, he waited awhile then walked in also, acting casual. He went to the bar and ordered red wine, the closest thing to blood he could get here...

(In Buffy, the Vamps could hide what they truly look like, and look human! Is that allowed?)

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Married Cloud Strife 9/17/08

((Yup.))

Margaret walked up to the bar brushing off all the attempts to flirt with her. "One diet coke, no ice." She ordered. Why she came here was a mystery, she rarely danced and only had pop. Then she noticed the man with red wine. She had seen him a few times and had bumped into him a while ago only briefly. Some how he must have senced her watching becasue he turned towards her, this caused her to advert her gaze and blush proffusly(SP?).

(thats fine)

He took a sip and felt her look at him. Brian looked over, and saw her turn her head and blush. 'Well, at least she has acknolaged me' he murmured to himself...

(proffusly? what does that mean? I'm only in the 7th grade!)

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Married Cloud Strife 9/17/08