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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: June 29th, 2018, 12:00 am 
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Alrighty - Almara's been formally accepted in her new role (begrudgingly by Farien) and Amarwen has discovered not only that Halvarin has quit Osgiliath but also that she is to be formally betrothed at midday before the assembled court.

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I've kinda got an idea knocking about Aldamir and Almara's mother that would set up how it was that he didn't know he had another child...

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: June 29th, 2018, 10:17 pm 
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Sounds good to me. Go for it. :D

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 1st, 2018, 12:41 am 
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Alrighty - I did a bit of a short cut on the exchange between Amarwen and Almara as it was just getting too wordy.

To be clear, Amarwen has come clean to Almara. Partly because she increasingly trusts and partly because liquor can undo even the most reluctant tongue.

What this means at this juncture is that Almara holds all the 'cards' so to speak. She knows about Halvarin, about the Library tryst, about Farien's attempts to first negotiate but then threaten and also about the events in Edhellond that preceded this (alluded to in the exchange between Therald and Calimir).

Amarwen knows that Almara once worked for Calimir - but not whether she continues to do so. Amarwen knows that Almara has some sort of relationship to Rie-Zunic, but not what that relationship is. Amarwen knows that Farien really doesn't like Almara, but nothing as to why that is.

And on that subject, the reason Aldamir was clueless as to Almara's existence is because her mother left before he knew that she was with child. Why she left so swiftly, and who was responsible....well, you guessed it, Calimir and Farien had more than a little to do with that.

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 2nd, 2018, 7:40 pm 
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Alrighty sounds good. On my way tonread the posts.

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 8th, 2018, 4:35 am 
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Excellent work, my fellow writers!

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 8th, 2018, 8:37 am 
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Posted a short one-on-one interaction between Aldamir and Amarwen.

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 8th, 2018, 9:38 am 
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Three shortish ones in a row:

Amarwen's response to Aldamir

An exchange between Farien and Eldacar in the wake of the betrothal, and

A discussion between three shieldmaidens that have snuck in to observe, from the nosebleed section, the day's events.

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 9th, 2018, 8:16 pm 
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I threw a bit of a twist in. Shall see where it goes. ;)

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 10th, 2018, 3:26 am 
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:yes: I likes that twist - Jax

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
PostPosted: July 15th, 2018, 11:42 am 
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*Thumbs up* :D

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 Post subject: Re: The Waning Days of King Valacar ~ OOC Commentary
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Alrighty - the newly betrothed couple have returned and Girdean is busy locking in supporters for Castimir's ambitions regarding secession.

I'm tempted to do a piece from Rhinnin and Vilmaith's perspective....

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