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PostPosted: May 13th, 2007, 4:06 am 
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Beautiful poems... but quite sad both of them. I couldn't help commenting on them...
Ellie, is it named Untitled on purpose?
It's like it takes a turn when focus shifts onto the girl. I absolutely love the four opening lines. Afterwards it gets so sad. But the last four lines flow really well too. I would have loved if you elaborated on the middle part. I feel like hearing more about her life! :-)

ethelfleda, it's a very complete poem. The rhyming and rythm flow extremely well and the message is clear. I agree that it is very simple, but it makes it powerful, sort of raw, because it is very easy to relate to it. However... I miss the hope, just a sparkle in the end, but I know it would probably ruin the whole text...

I know I probably shouldn't comment on your entries before the voting starts. I can edit my post if you think it will influence on future entries and the final voting :-)


EDIT: Commented on Ellie's poem in the Fanfic forum

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No one has to worry about any comments influencing my judging. I'm very hard headed. ;)

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I think I'll enter, if that's all right...

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I would love to see you enter!

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Goodie! :) Here's my entry... (It's a poem i wrote a while ago--it's from Sam's point of view, talking to Frodo.)

As Much as This

The Elves may sing in twilit lands,
"Our love for Earth is deep--
Beyond the depths of Ocean sands,
This in our hearts we keep:"

In learning all the things of lore,
The Wizards and the Wise,
May love their charges "past all lore
That locked in Arda lies:"

Tree-herders love their forests long--
Beyond the passing Age,
Entwining with the woodland song--
Immortal life's long wage:

And Angels give their Arda love
Far greater than the sky--
But me, I know so little of
The deep, the fair, the high:

I cannot say, "more long than years,"
For I've not lived an Age--
Nor, "past the lore of Elvenseers"--
I'm not wise like a sage...

I can't say, "deeper than the Sea"
Which I have never seen--
Nor wrought the Earth in heaven's lee,
Ere Sunlight and Moonsheen:

I cannot know the mighty lore
That Ea harbours furled--
I only know I love you more
Than aught else in the World.

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^ that's wonderful eariel.

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Great job. Any other takers?

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Thanks, everyone. :) *goes into standby mode* ;)

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CLOSED!!!

Ok, this is now closed. I'll be looking over the entries and will post the winners by May 30th.

Thanks to all who entered.



NO ENTRIES POSTED BELOW THIS WILL BE CONSIDERED.

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Thanks, i'm glad to know this hasn't been forgotten.

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And the winners are...

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Congrats. I want to thank you all for participating. It was a real pleasure to read your poems and it's really nice to see more people writing rhyme and meter particularly so well. Great job!

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