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PostPosted: September 24th, 2006, 8:17 pm 
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I'm sry guys, i'm working on it. i really truly am. things have been so freakin' crazy around here..... :blush: I get on a lot, but i only have time 2 for like 5 mins........I'm still working on collecting all the poems in 1 post 4 our 2 judges.... :closedeyes: I'm so sry! I'm working on it & will try 2 get it done ASAP!! :confused:

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S'okay Pip. I just wanted to see what was going on. Kind of give a friendly reminder. Thanks for the update!
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Once again, been swamped w/ hw. :confused: & now i hafta go 2 the dentist & then shopping...........& then tomorrow I have a solo so i ahve 2 practice & stuff & that'll be crazy.....but HOPEFULLY i can get this 2gether saturday so the judges can judge. if any1 else gets a chance 2 do it, go ahead..............sry this is taking so long to every1 who entered!! I feel really bad.... :closedeyes: Once again, sry & i'm working on it!!

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OK, pip! I've collected all the poems for you in this post (I also pm´ed you).
OMG, this was really hard work ;) (27 pages in Word!!!)
Here you go:


Eldárwen

Just push past my barrier why don't you?
Make me starve in your insanity,
Selfishness-your insanity,
Tear drops leaking from my eyelids,
Every drop,
A drop of pain leaking flames,
Devoworing stillness,
Nothing seems alive,
Someone save me from your bittersweet insanity,
Cold quenching blood runs through your viens,
Through them pain,
Someone save you from your bittersweet insanity.
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Take me away with you,
Hide me,
Love me,
Break my bounds,
Which keep me here,
In this dark casim,
Save me from my bitterness,
This darkness which clouds my mind,
Like a vampire sucking my blood away,
Im dryed up,
Take me away with you,
Save me.


pirateoftherings

For you, I will lose my composure.
For you, I won’t know what to say.
For you, I will face my most terrible fears.
For you, I have lived ‘til this day.

For you, I will risk my own safety.
For you, I will put forth all haste.
For you, I will disregard all laws and orders.
For you, it will not be a waste.

For you, I will sail o’er the ocean.
For you, I will search through the night.
For you, I will go without sleep or nutrition.
For you, I will tirelessly fight.

For you, I will see my own failure.
For you, I will right what is wrong.
For you, I will give the one thing I desire.
For you, I will evermore long.

For you, I will learn to let go.


TrueNarnian

Don't Go
By: Elf Maiden

You walk to your
Death with a stern
face and pride,
I watch in the
Sahdows as I
quietly Cry
I look at your face,
it looks nither sad
or glad. You look
sort of troubled,
as you walk slowly
though this land
Your Proud head
drooped, sunken low
to the earth, makes
me Cry at the sight
As you stop and
look up, with monster's
so near, I hide
behind the bushes
to watch in Fear
With a sreaming laugh
and a knife in hand, the
One who will kill you,
is drawing near at hand.
"Why doesn't he fight back?"
I whisper to myself as they
bound you and taunt you
with shrieks and laughs.
The Knife raises's above you,
and with a joyous laugh,
the Knife falls and smotes you.
I whisper "Don't Go...
No! Dont kill him please!"
Its too late now there is
nothing to be done, as the
monsters scatter, and flee through
the Wood.
With sobs and tears, I walk near you,
to see your face, as I never knew


Linariel

The Darkness, which used to war on my mind
By: Lydia King

Far away in the gloom of my mind was a thought, which I hid from others
Every night it grew on me a haunting presence that make me cry
When I was young this thrashing demon was a part of my soul
It used me ruined my life
Made me wish I could loose my breath and fall into its fiery pit
I weeped as the chains grew tighter
Fighting till my soul grew faint
Soon I was close to giving into this hell
Every thought in my mind was bent towards my own destruction
Till one day something changed
I felt these shackles that bond me fall off me
Looking up I glanced upon a wondrous sight
There before my eyes was a man
He smiled at me with his eyes full of love, and concern
Taking away the shackles I felt the deathing thoughts in my heart leave my mind
Looking at me with those warm smiling eyes he spoke. “There will be no more thought of blood.”
Something about him reminded me of a dream
There had been a savior who was in my life when I was young
He held me close comforting me
But then I fled him because of lies
Now he has come back to save me from my own fate
There I wept into his arms till my tears went dry
Then I felt renewed the shadow was gone
I felt peace like I once did before I fled
Like I was living again that demon that wore on my mind for so long was gone
Now, yes now I was free
Free
Free from anger, which derived me towards those shadows
Free from pity that made me weak
Free from the invisible mockery which I thought was there
Now I feel the warm rays of the sun and believe that never again will darkness haunt my life

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My Human Pet, and I
By: Lydia King

It is 7 o’clock AM
Time for my human to serve me
Now usually they’re in bed sleeping
Which I have no idea why they sleep
Night is the perfect time to prowl for goodness sake
But then again they are strange race
So I jump on top their soft perch
Let claws out to greet their bed sheets
Then by kneading my paws into their back my human stirs
Shooting up, looking about with sweat on their faces they look so frightened
Then they look down at me
I smile a very cute and innocent smile
Soon it gets through their weak mind that I am hungry
Jumping off their perch they walk slowly out of my room
Yawning they look for my food
Making sure they don’t slack I rub my soft body against their legs, stepping on their paws from time to time
For you see humans love it when we give them affection
It’s the best way to get them to behave
Glancing down at me they smile, and take a cup of food to my room
To be sure they don’t slack I lead the way making them almost trip over me
I speak to them saying, “Faster servant I must eat now!”
They pat me on the head, and say “You're cute,”
I don’t think they got the message
But soon we reach my eating area
Jumping on it I purr and rub against their hand while they try to get my meal into the bowl
Soon I get to eat
They sigh and start to leave the room
This is not right says I
I jump off the perch and dash after them speaking over and over again “Come back now.”
After a little bit of persuasion they finally go back into the room, and watch me eat
It is so good to have a human pet
I think every cat should have one
Don’t you?


Pandora

Frodo and Sam

Don’t go where I cant follow,
don’t swim when I cant breath,
I promised I would stay with you
that promise I shall keep

don’t stop when I go on
don’t yell when I weep
for I promised to stay with you
and that promise I shall keep

together we will make it through
through the end of all things
and see the world that once was
beautiful and green

all I ask from you my friend
is to help me keep my promise
don’t go where I cant see you
don’t go where I cant follow

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Faramir’s Woe

I go away to war
for you
I lay my life on the line
for you
yet you still don’t care
for me

I try to be the best son
for you
I stay noble and true
for you
yet you still don’t care
for me

I will try my best to be there
for you
I will be the son you wanted
for you
yet you still don’t care
for me

I will come back
for you
I will be beaten down
for you

hopefully then you will care
hopefully you will remember
hopefully you will grieve
for me


ForeverFrodo

memories

are little butterflies
sitting on flowers of happiness
memories are clouds
blown away by the wind
memories
are golden leaves
falling into the river of life
memories are stars
in the night of our fears
memories are jewels
glittering with the light of joy
memories are friends
that will stay with you
always

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The Day Will Come
For Frodo and Sam

Don´t go
where I can´t follow
you cried
And yet you know
this time you have
to let me go
But I promise you, dear Sam
This goodbye is not forever
All souls pass and
This world shall fade
The day will come
when you shall hand
the book to your heir
The day will come
when you too shall sail
across the sea
following the call
I will be waiting for you
on the white shore
of Valinor
Tha day will come
when we will meet again


Weeziey

Come to me

In the clearing there is grass
But upon that grass is I
Hoping that you’ll walk by
And see me sipping on the river water

Ah yes the river
Clear and blue
Remember how it was
Where I first saw you?

As I sit upon the grass
Watching the sun go down
I wish you would walk by
One last time

Like you did long ago
While I sat on this grass
Oh but that was long ago
For my memory is blurred
And I wish to remember once more

I look to the sky
As I hear someone walk by
And call
“ Come To me once more!”


gollum13

It's a strange feeling.
The feeling of being left alone, lying here, helpless, hopeless without anything.
Not even a name. A name you can call, a name you know, a name you...love.
Nobody's here for you, your hope, love, joy has faded. There's only left a feeling.
And a cold and unloved call for you. You've nothing left, but loneliness.
You've no friends, no love, no joy.
Your life will end her. No hope is left for you.
You're alone, hopeless to die. Left alone and unloved.
The feeling is cold. You know it's getting over, but the loneliness will stay.
There's no hope left for you.
You'll die alone...unloved...unknown...forever.

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What if you die today?
Is there somebody for you?
To be on your side, showing you the way through the darkness till you reach the light?
For me, there's nothing here.
Nobody to stay with me, nobody holding my hand till it's over.
The faces are only illusions. Nothing's real.
I'm alone. The faces fade away.
All that is left is darkness, surrounding me, shadows, trying to eat me.
And I know...I'm alone...till end.


Jax Nova

"The Crystal Rainbow Sea"

A flood of blue and white,
Inside an distant sky.
A vision without sight,
Where the imortals die.

Swirls of red and green,
Mixing soothingly.
A sight not to be seen,
But waited for expectedly.

With every passing breath,
And every thought you give.
That brings the sudden death,
Yet lets you know you live.

In the land shall be,
All but a memory.
In the crystal rainbow sea,
Where we spend enternity.

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"Where I belong"

The crystal skies parted,
As I floated slowly by.
My mind now disheartened,
Floated through the sky.

Below the land was green,
Lush with it's life and it's love.
But after what I'd seen,
I would rather stay above.

I don't belong down there,
On golden shores below.
In the weather bright and fair,
Or in sparkling winter snow.

I'm simply not the same,
As the lovely lives below.
Now alone I must go,
Where ever the winds blow.

They told me I was different,
It didn't hurt me much.
I knew it in an instant,
That all my ways were such.

But they always called me wrong,
And said that I must change.
I must sing a well known song,
That's well within there range.

They tell me how I'm feeling,
And why I do what I do.
And of my different dealing,
They said I was not true.

And if this is the case,
How could I stay down there?
Stay there in such a place,
Instead of in the air?

With eagles now I fly,
On clouds I lay my head.
Watching life go on by,
From my celestial bed.

But through the clouds came to me,
A light and voice so sweet.
He opened my mind to see,
And shed light on my retreat.

It's not in crystal skies,
And not with them I know.
It's not where mortal dies,
But there with God below.

It's not because of them,
That I do or don't belong.
So I return again,
Singing my separate song.

And in the trials sweet,
That tarry for so long.
I retreat from my retreat,
Back to where I belong.


Lady Dark Moon

Son of no man worth mentioning
Child of no god worth serving
I walk alone
On this trail of bitter tears
Tears stained with blood
Pain hollowed by remorse
Grief depraved by anger
Alone
I lost it all
Though I never had it
Long nights of cold emptiness
Reaching for a mother's caress
Yearning for a father's warmth
Love?
How can I love when innocence is tainted?
How can I feel when feeling dies?
Steel my tempered spirit with apathy
Show no emotion
Reveal no pain
Sit my tormented soul by the unforgiving ice
Hide the flame of rage from my shadowed eyes
Cloak myself in impassive enigma
I roar from behind the bars of my solitude
Can nobody hear me scream?
Can nobody sense my pain?
Still I cry
But I shed no tears
Here I stand on a bitter path
In this realm of bitter steel
Son of no man
Child of no god
And I face my end alone

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For You

I heard your call
I felt your anguish
Like an intangible shroud of darkness
You noticed me not
But I watched you brood
Bereft and alone
As shadows lengthened behind your hunched frame

What pain lurks behind your cynical eyes?
How much suffering can a single mind hold?
Take your cold hand in mine
Let me unveil the light
Let compassion steep your spirit
Warm your blood
Learn to forget
Learn to look to the august horizon

Remember the days when we were one
When our hopes and dreams outshone the sun
I gave you my love
I showed you the truth
Why can't you see all I've done for you?

I fought an endless black abyss
I bridged a yawning chasm
I found the recess of your soul
Branded with fire
Lanced with ice
The sorrow I harbored
For you

I gave you my life
I placed my trust in your hands
I suffer the burn of tears
For you
Living each day to see you smile
Living each moment like an age
Embrace my trembling form in your arms
Whisper to me that you care
Wading in something much too deep
I scream one word at you
"Why?"

Remember the days when we were one
When our hopes and dreams outshone the sun
I gave you my love
I showed you the truth
Why can't you see all I've done for you?

Can one heart bleed as much as this?
Can one being feel such pain?
Betrayal
Denial
Sear my heart with acid flame
Douse it once more with thunder
You never knew how much I cared
You never understood my grief
Tear out my heart
Bleed fresh the wound
I do this for love of you

For you I sacrificed everything
For you I cut open my soul
I loved you
I helped you
I showed you the light
For you I'd take my life

Remember the days when we were one
When our hopes and our dreams outshone the sun
I gave you my love
I showed you the truth
I weep for the memories
Of you


EarielMaurwen

Don't let go (Has someone already used this title? )

I see it in your tortured eyes--
Too long you've known no peace:
Once more your load between us lies,
And death is but release:
But Master, I can't let you fall--
Without you I am lost!--
Though you want to answer to its call,
You've already paid the cost.

Choose between us--
Slaver and servant--
Ruling in grandeur,
Or a heart that still loves you
And cries, "Don't let go!"

Too long I've wandered by your side--
Too long we've shared this Road:
Too long with aching heart I've tried
To ease your heavy load:
Too long I've loved you, and at last
I'm fighting for your heart:
Release the Ring in Fire cast--
'Tis long ere we should part!


You fell beneath the Burden's call,
And still it's hold you keep:
Yet I know you sought it's end with all,
And still I love you deep:
If nothing's left except the Ring
As on the brink you stand,
I claim you then, my everything--
Reach out and take my hand!

Choose between us--
Slaver and servant--
Ruling in grandeur,
Or a heart that still loves you
And cries, "Don't let go!"


Catch me--take hold as I answer your call:
You I will choose and let Burden's weight fall...

I choose between you,
My slaver, my servant--
Forsaking cruel grandeur,
My worn heart still loves you
And cries, „Don't let go!“

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That I Love You

Verse 1
Teardrops fall,
Like sea-spray breaking in the wind--
"Don't go," you call,
As the roads you've walked beside me end:

All things end--
Yet still the Dawnlight breaks at morning:
Feel the wind,
And remember that I love you.

Verse 2
Remember me--
My broken life is yours to live--
For you there will be
All wonder that the World may give:

Yet look to Sea,
When Dawnlight turns at last to sunset--
Come to me,
And I'll tell you that I love you.

Bridge
Don't be afraid to say goodbye,
And weep as we part:
Yet still you are with me--
I carry you in my heart.

Verse 3
So smile again--
For soon I fly to Elvenlight--
And in the rain,
To Earth I die, for all is night:

Love and pain
Are bound together till the Dawnlight--
Yet the rain
Is singing that I love you,
Is singing that I love you.


Tinuviel's Tears

Visit To the Hole In My Heart

Where am I? you wonder as you
slowly begin to wake.
You look around you and behold
a most desolate place
Everything is emptiness
No living thing is seen
The sky above is deepest black
It misses the stars' gleam
There isn't any color here
just blacks and faded grays
A frightful chill is in the air
It fills you with dismay
"What is this place?" you speak aloud
although not meaning to
But then, out of the nothingness,
a deep Voice answers you
"Thy traveled deep within thyself
to thy heart's very core
This is the wasted piece of heart
from which your pain doth pour."
"But why is it all emptiness?
What's missing that was here?
You scream into the Nothingness
praying the Someone's there
"This is the place in thy heart where
thou gave away thy love
to who thou thought would give it back
but who could give thee none
This could have been the fairest place
thine eyes had ever seen
with rushing rivers, twinkling stars,
tall trees so fresh and green
But thou hast not received love to
make whole the empty place
And thus this land is what you see
all dead and laid to waste."
"So then this place within my heart
must be forever bare.
And I am doomed to walk this land,
forever in despair."
"Nay," says the voice, "For I bring forth
tidings of hope to thee.
All you must do is find someone
who loves thou and thou, he.
Then finally this place shall be
as always was intended.
What was a void shall then be full,
the hole in thy heart mended.
But now it's time that I must go.
I bid farewell to thee."
"But wait!" you cry, "I have to know!
Who could ever love me?"
"Thou shall find him." says the voice
and bids his last goodbye.
You sink onto the barren earth
In wretchedness, you cry.

When you open your eyes you see
the dagger in your hand
It's point poised just above your heart
awaiting your command
But now you draw the point away
Death is no more your wish
Instead you dream of being held
In lover's tender kiss
The Voice's words have given hope,
you now despair no more.
For you know your love is waiting
Though he be on a far distant shore.

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I Know I'll Find You

Well maybe it's pure lunacy
And you and I could never be
But I have faith, and I believe
That we will meet someday

Though far away, you're calling me
It drives me to insanity
With all my soul I long for thee
A torment bittersweet

I've met you often in my dreams
Though so vivid, that real they seemed
But always i awoke and deemed
That they were nothing more

Though sundered now may be our paths
I trust that they will cross at last
Destroyed, the darkness of the past
Will be against your light

The shadows then will fade away
The dark of night will turn today
The song within my heart will play
And I'll sing it to thee

When I'm loved by you, you by me
I'll be at last in ecstacy
Within your love, I'll be complete
At last my soul made whole

I'll wait for you for all my life
I'll endure pain and fear and strife
But when, at last, you hold me tight
I'll know that I am home



Ellendie-elfmaid

She couldn't hide her tears away
no matter how she tried
For fear, she closed her heart away
Since ere her lover died
She fought the barriers of mind and soal
closed of the ends of heart ache
and hid away beneath her pain
for fear of another heart break
But just before she fell beneath
the weight of hidden tears
she found that someone touched her heart
and broke the bariers there
What could it be, this touch so new
yet I'v known it before
She looked and found the king was there
beckoning through her door
For in the pain and sorrow deep
Unknown she faded away
And here in the undying lands
She found her lover's hand at last
The hands she'd held when cold as stone
But now within the light of day
And here where they'd forever stay
Instead of cold with deaths cruel breath
They were warm!

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Where sea and sky will meet

Beneath the shade we parted
ere the sun set in the west.
Left alone here, broken hearted
Watching you take final breath

I knew that your time was coming
That your night was drawing nigh
Yet I never thought I'd feel this way
When kissing you goodbye

We had many years together
Loving, laughing, weeping too;
And I always felt contented,
My heart being one with you

But I see your eyes are dimming;
Your breath comes in fitful gasps,
So I sing to you and kiss you
Knowing it will be your last

Oh sweet Aragorn, my love and king
I know your death is near
My heart is tearing in my breast
To see you lying there

But I know that someday,ere to long
when my years, too, are spent
I'll meet with you across the sea
And once more be content!

Where stars cast silver light upon
The land, undying green
Where old friends are waiting there upon
The shore, old friends to see;

I will meet thee there, my faithfull love
And there it is we'll greet,
Though I watched your death, still soon we'll stand
Where sea and sky will meet!

~Ellendie~


lady_Ëarwen

My hero
He came out of the darkness
Gave life to me in the shadow
My world was so full of evil
Until he came to rescued me

A hero from with in his heart
Fallen in love with a simpleton
Saved me from this evil place
Even from all my selfish rebellion

He came back for his lost love
Surrounded with evil and hurt
Came back to save me at last
Even though I broke his heart

Why did he come back for me
I didn’t deserve his kindness
I wasn’t worthy of his heart
He rescued me from the dark

Put his life in Danger for mine
I was so sorry for he was gone
Will he come back, will he live
All this is my fault, he is gone

Still there is still hope for him
He is an hero, who saves all
He came along to save me
He caught me when I fell

I will rescue him from this
I will Brake down the walls
Take every broken bone
For I want to repay him
For every time he saved
Every thing he did for me

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Footprints
Dreaming the sweetest dream
Nothing is as use to seem to be
I was walking on the sandy beach
Jesus, my saviour was beside me

I saw my footprints far behind me
I looked into the bright blue sky
And this is what I did then see
My life flashed before my eyes

I saw two pair of footprints
His and mine, I followed his
I was so happy I felt so free
For the footprints were his

But on the way I found
That in a time of need
There was only two footprints
Where were my Saviours?

I looked unto my Saviours face
As i questioned him about this
Lord, why weren't you there
Why did you forsake me?

He looked at me and said
I was always there for you
My dear precious child
Why would I ever forsake you

The time you saw one pair of footprints
That was the day I carried you away
That was the day I took away your pain
All of your hurt and sadness all away


Arawn

The tomb
Once there was an Elven lady
Bright and lovely as the dawn
She was loved and loved in turn
A king of men, a mortal one

She renounced her ancient right
She became a mortal queen
Her family left the country's shores
To journey to th' Undying Lands

She brought peace to the lands of men
Together with her loving king
But, though he lived 200 years,
He died and left her woebegone

She journeyed to the silent woods
Left in peace by Elves so fair
And there she laid alone to rest
To sleep until the dusk of life

And so she sleeps in e'ergreen woods
The leaves of brown and green surround
Her silent form so beautiful
They give her peace, they stand their guard

Around the tomb all life grows still
Her body now no longer seen
The wood prevents a spying glance
The Evenstar doth sleep in peace
She who once a mortal queen.

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Water
Have you ever been
In a cave behind a waterfall
Walls glistening
Full of jewels that catch the water’s light

Have you ever been
Sitting by the side of a brook
Stones glistening
With green plants surrounding your seat

Have you ever been
Sailing down a river wide
Sunlight glistening
On the blur of water rushing past

Have you ever been
Diving into the deep blue sea
Water glistening
Hordes of fish swimming through this fairy-tale world

Have you ever been
Swimming in the greatest ocean
Salt glistening
As the vastness of this ocean overwhelms

Have you ever been
Fed up like I am
Tears glistening
Sitting at the window watching the rain


pip&leggyluvr

Falling In Love

She first met him on a dark day.
A day filled with darkness, and sorrow;
Filled with shades of gray.
Filled with thoughts of evil,
And shadows.
A day filled with rain clouds & storms.
A day filled with rain and hail, snow and lightning,
Pain and suffering, tears and sorrow.

Yet suddenly, the mist seemed to clear,
The clouds, to part.
The fear, to lessen.
And that was when, she saw him.
Kind and happy, sweet and beautiful.
Perfect in every way.
The sun seemed to shine, and the birds to sing.
Shadow and evil, no longer stirred in her heart.

Everyday after,
Darkness still lingered,
Yet it seemed not to matter.
For everyday, she knew he would be there,
And what little darkness that was there,
Would be gone,
The moment that she laid eyes on him.
Everything seemed to be finally turning around.

But evil does not give up so easily.


It returned, now stronger than ever,
Making her think she was nothing.
Worth nothing, felt nothing, saw nothing, had nothing,
Was nothing.
Made here think, she wasn’t good enough for him.
Made her think, that he would never love a girl like her.

So she made a promise to herself,
That she couldn’t let him know.
Under no circumstances, could she let him know.
She couldn’t let him know, how she felt.
How every time he glanced her way, her heart melted.
How every time he laughed, she felt like she was soaring.
How every time he cried, her heart cried with him.
How every time he talked to her, she was afraid.
Afraid, that she was falling, falling,
In love.

For if she fell in love with him, and he with her,
He would gain nothing.
For she wasn’t worth anything;
For she was nothing.

Everyday, she lived in fear.
Fear of him,
And fear of herself;
Fear of darkness and shadows.

So one day, in a desperate attempt,
To end her pain,
And take away any he may ever have encountered, had he fallen,
She pulled out a dagger, and raised it before he heart.
She was ready to end it,
Ready for it to stop;
Ready to plunge it into her heart, and be lost,
Forever.

She was so close.
So close, to it ending,
When suddenly, she heard a desperate cry….


NO!!

It echoed through the night,
And stopped her plunge,
If only for a moment.
She turned to look,
And there he stood.
He rushed forward, taking the dagger from her hand….
And she let him.

I cannot let thee kill thyself, he said.
For if it were to be so, I would have to, in turn,
Kill myself, as well.
For I could not live, without your face,
Without your smile,
Without you tears;
Without You.

For you see, evil haunted me.
Darkness surrounded me.
Shadows engulfed me,
Until I met you.
You are my light in darkness,
My hope in fear,
My angel;
My love.
Without you, I would surely perish.

And as he finished, tears leaked from her eyes.
He shook his head in confusion.
Why have I upset thee?
I don’t understand.
But she smiled, and lifted her hand to his face.
My love, she whispered.
My precious, precious love.
I cry not tears of sorrow, but tears of joy.
For in darkness, I too walked.
But now, I have found the light, in your eyes.
You are my light, my hope, my refuge;
My love.
I loveth thee,
And ye loveth me.
And I have found hope in this crazy world, for the first time in my life.

Ye loveth me back?
He asked, quietly.
And she nodded, a smile on her face, and a light in her eyes.
And he leaned forward, and kissed her lightly.
He didn’t want to go to far;
Didn’t want to scare her.
But she was no longer afraid.
As he leaned back, she stopped him, her hand on his face.
Don’t Stop, she whispered.
Don’t ever stop.

And all the darkness was lifted,
And light filled their lives.
And they lived, and died, and were,
Together.
For she loveth him
And he loveth her.
For evil does not give up easily,
But love,
Never does.

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A Walk To Remember (From Landon's POV)

I had never shown her any attention.
I had never looked her way.
But by the time I realized I was in love,
I knew that it was too late.

Everything about her was perfect.
She was everybody’s friend.
I will never forget the day I found out,
That her life was soon to end.

All the darkness had finally lifted,
The day her hand touched mine.
But now it seemed to all be coming back.
Things were slowly starting to decline.

I remember going home that day,
And crying all night long.
I felt like my heart had been ripped out;
Everything was going so wrong.

I had dreamed of the day that I would meet,
The one that was perfect for me.
But now that I finally had,
She was being ripped away from me.

A couple days afterwards;
After she’d told me of her news,
She came, stood on my doorstep, looked me in the eye,
And said those blessed words, “I love you.”

I knew I didn’t have long with her,
So I got straight to work.
I made all her wildest dreams come true,
And did my best to hide all my hurt.

And then I did something that I
Never thought would come to be.
I got on my knee, and asked my love,
If she would marry me.

And so it was,
We became husband and wife.
We made our promise,
To be together, for life.

It was a beautiful day;
Everything went great.
Everything was fine,
Until in, crept fate.

We hadn’t been married long,
When suddenly one day,
My angel fainted,
And was taken away.

Her long beautiful hair,
And her sweet tender head,
Now rested on a pillow,
In a hospital bed.

Every day and night,
On that bed she lay.
And slowly, to my horror,
I watched her fade away.

I think about her everyday,
And dream of her each night.
But I know that she is heaven,
And I know that she’s alright.

For now that she is gone,
Her love is like the wind.
I can’t see it,
But I’ll always be able to feel it.


Rose of Rivendell

For you
(Arwen's poem to Aragorn)

Our love was only meant to be a dream-
A beautiful dream, but one with a sad ending
For you and me.

We both knew at once
That worlds lie between us two, but
For you and me that did not mean anything.

They said the fate of an Elf and a Man in love
Must always be bitter and full of sorrow, but
For you and me this seemed impossible.

From the hour we met life was full of joy,
We could not imagine to part one day,
For you and me nothing else existed except for our love.

Now as Middle-Earth lies under a dark shadow
Our predicted fate seems to become true, but
For you I try to change the course of time.

My life should go on and on forever,
Peacefully I should rest in the West, but
For you I decided to refuse this gift.

I will share the fate of Lúthien,
I will spend my life at your side,
For you I have given up my immortality.

My decision was hard to understand for many,
I was told I would not be wise, but
For you I will take this risk.

My life is uncertain by now,
I do not know how it will continue, but
For you I will abandon my people.

I can hardly wait for the day when we shall meet again,
My heart feels so empty and cold, but
For you I will wait until the end of days.

I cannot go into the West anymore,
My decision made once cannot be changed, but
For you and me hope did never die and will never do so.

~by Rose (18 August 2006)


keyodie

The One Who Never Existed
You come close to me
Closer than any other
Touch me, protect me
Much more than I deserve
You stroke my hair
My head of evil and treachery
You whisper into my ears
Words I know I will never hear

You are there when I want you
And yet, are not when I need you
You comfort me with your touch
And yet, I feel an unpleasant emptiness
Sometimes I long for you
Search for you through the streets
I have taken my chances
Too many, I agree
And yet, I have never found you
I have never found one quite like you

You are the one thing in this world
That I really need
The one thing in the world
That I truly want
And yet, are you there?
Do you truly love me, like I believe?
Do you know me?
Do you know that I still live?

Sometimes, when you touch,
your fingers disappear
When you feel, when you protect
Your gaze looks at me, empty
You whisper in my ear
Words I am not meant to hear
Because deep down inside
I know you are too perfect
Too good
Too loving

When I look at you carefully
Look into your eyes
You suddenly disappear...
Into the cold air that once filled my room
For I know deep inside
Deep inside my heart
That you are out of my reach
And that you will never reward me with your presence
Why?

You never existed.


Witch_King_of_Angmar

Forth lept Jerusalem's King
Noble and proud 'top tall steed
Sword glimmering and helm tall
Cross ashine on proud chest

Lord's might none contests
His banners o'er desert lands
Gold cross on blue
The symbol of knights proud and true

Sepulchre's crown now lies in dust
Valiant sword lost to rust
Kingdom lain to all but waste
Great King Baldwin interred with haste


.•**Elly**•.

Alone:

So in the end I will be what I will be,
No loyal friend was ever there for me.
Now we say goodbye... We say you didn't try.
The tears you cry, have hurt so many lives.
Take back the lies, the hurt, the blame.
And you will wait, as you face the end alone.
You are lost, you can never go home.

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Minutes:

Was it worth it? what I gave away
For five minutes of fame.
Minutes over, no on e knows my name
And my five minutes of fame.
This time I'm saying "No!".
This world will know what I believe in.
I've lost enogh to know that lifes to short to wast it!
Was it worth it? what I gave away
For five minutes of fame.
Minutes over, no on e knows my name
And my five minutes of fame.

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Rose of Rivendell, you are my hero. You rock. You're amazing. All hail Rose! :notworthy:

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*also hails* I sent u a pm expressing my luv 4 u, but i will here as well. lol
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I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!

lol. Seriously, ur like my hero!!! Thanks again SOOOOOOOOOO much!!! *hugs like crazy* :hug:

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*smiles* No problem! :)
I'm glad that I could help! :-D

Btw: I've just sent the pm to Kitoky and hobobagins09....

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wow Rose that was really nice of you! :hug:

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LOVE Rose!! lol :-D

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All hail Rose!! Thanks so much, you've helped us all out!! :) :hug:

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Great job Rose!!!! WOW! You are like the best, you should win an arourd for that or something!

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yes!! I shall make u one once i make the awards!! lol :-P

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^I think that'd be cool, Pip. :P All hail Rose! Now, I suppose we wait till the results are in... *continues to wait nervously* ;)

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Is anything going on here?

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I don't know. I suppose that we're waiting for the judging to be finished.

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Ok. Pip, we've been waiting for months. Not to be rude, but I think we'd all like to know who the winners are. Could you possibly hurry up whatever judges haven't finished, or just post what you have so far? Please and thank you! :)


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