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Post subject:  Posted: August 17th, 2005, 4:33 pm |
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Is there still spots left? pardon me, ARE there still spots left? *looks hopeful* I'm not really sure what to call it.
Edit: I made it a blend-y thing! I used art from Amy Brown - so pretty! it's too bad I had to post it here as a JPEG, that messes everything up. 
I wrote it looking out my window at my pretty trees and listening to Loreena McKennit (very inspirational!) _________________ <a href="http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/?action=view¤t=StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" target="_blank"><img src="http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>
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Post subject: Posted: August 17th, 2005, 5:32 pm |
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Tanthoronial wrote: Lady Alias - I like that your poems on a picture... that's cool. At first I though it was a song  heh, nice rhyming, you describe a very nice scene there! Great job! GaladrielLadyOfLight - Ahh the power of colored text! hehe, another beautiful non-rhyming poem, (I will make a poem in which I don't rhyme, I hope  ) You poem also creates like a scene in the mind. I like how you said, 'Standing there stopped in dance' its a good line. Great poem! Good luck again everyone!!  (sorry in a smily mood, heh) Tanthoronial, I appreciate it that you took the time to compliment the contestants on their entries.
Oh, and IdrilFalastari - we're glad to take your entry.  _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: August 17th, 2005, 9:52 pm |
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Tanthoronial wrote: Lady Alias - I like that your poems on a picture... that's cool. At first I though it was a song heh, nice rhyming, you describe a very nice scene there! Great job! O a song...lol i used to write songs....-meep- thanks for the comment! _________________ <img src="http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/3064/mka5il.jpg" alt="it's a twin thing."><br><img src="http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/520/arwen29co.jpg" alt="Daughter of twilight..">
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Post subject: Posted: August 17th, 2005, 10:33 pm |
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Elberethsq wrote: Tanthoronial, I appreciate it that you took the time to compliment the contestants on their entries.
Heh... its easy with all the good poems!
Lady Alias- No prob for the comment, and that's cool that you used to write songs!
IdrilFalastari- I do that when I write sometimes, I'll go outside and listen to music hoping to get inspiration for a poem or story. I love how you said, 'The wind is alive, I feel it in my fingers..., Around me the earth is breathing, And I am still' That's an awesome stanza!! Great poem!
Good luck! _________________ <center> Proud Member many Clubs (specially the Nazgul Club) Nazgul #3
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Post subject: Posted: August 17th, 2005, 11:40 pm |
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Thanks Tanthoronial! I enjoyed reading the other entries, I was completely ignoring this contest until... today... and I'm glad I read them, they're all so beautiful! _________________ <a href="http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/?action=view¤t=StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" target="_blank"><img src="http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>
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Post subject: Posted: August 18th, 2005, 8:50 pm |
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Finally...I wrote somethng.
I'm glad poems dont have to rhyme, I used free verse.
Footsteps by Ellethwen
Softly trickles the water
In the clear streams
Of the forest
As she walks on the green grass
The leaves crunch beneath her feet
A wind sighs through the branches
A following footstep is heard
But what it may be no one knows
She turns around
But finds only
A fleeing shadow, a fleeting laugh
And lingering in the place where was
A following person
Is only a feel of something magical
She continues her walk
But once again
The footsteps pursue her
But nothing can be found
Of whom they belong to
She arrives at the hidden waterfall cave
Where noisy are the waters
And peering through the mists
She spies a figure standing below
She rushes to go see the person
But the figure has left
And once again all that remains
Is a spell of mystery
She still walks there
Searching ever
To find whom the footsteps belong to
But she will never find
The magic that takes them away
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2005, 9:50 am |
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GaladrielLadyOfLight - No problem!
IdrilFalastari - No prob, and yeah they are all beautiful, oh that picture you used on your entry is gorgeous!
Ellethwen - I love the last stanza of your poem, saying she'll never find out who's foot steps they were. Free verse poems are alot of fun to write.. unfortunately I can usually not write them  Ah well... it is a great poem!
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2005, 4:56 pm |
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IdrilFalastari wrote: I wrote it looking out my window at my pretty trees and listening to Loreena McKennit (very inspirational!)
Hey that's cool that ye know Loreena.....  I like her too.... hardly anyone around here knows her....
Lovely poems everyone... i should start counting the spots.. I lost overview but I think there are still spots left...
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Post subject: Posted: August 19th, 2005, 9:03 pm |
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I know! Isn't she awesome? I have "The Visit" and "The Mask and Mirror."
Myra wrote: Hey that's cool that ye know Loreena..... I like her too.... hardly anyone around here knows her.... _________________ <a href="http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/?action=view¤t=StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" target="_blank"><img src="http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>
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Post subject: Posted: August 20th, 2005, 6:45 am |
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-ish still pondering why doesnt write songs and such as much anymore then realizes shes pondering by typing-
ahh yes right, make myself sound crazy hehe.
everyones poems are beautiful and well written; congrads everyone....umm myra dearest who in eru's name is Loreena McKennit ?  _________________ <img src="http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/3064/mka5il.jpg" alt="it's a twin thing."><br><img src="http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/520/arwen29co.jpg" alt="Daughter of twilight..">
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Post subject: Posted: August 20th, 2005, 9:26 am |
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IdrilFalastari wrote: I know! Isn't she awesome? I have "The Visit" and "The Mask and Mirror."
Me too And yeeah...she's great 
Alias: She's a singer.
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Post subject: Posted: August 24th, 2005, 3:45 pm |
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If there are no more entries until tomorrow I'll send a PM to the judges soon and we'll close the contest. Thanks for your participation
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2005, 4:04 pm |
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Is the judging ever going to happen?
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2005, 7:30 pm |
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Oh my goodness! I will not be entering but i had to come and read all of the entries.
Ellethwen:it is a lovely free verse poem and it has inspired me to draw something, if I come out with something I'll scan it and show you.
GaladrielLadyofLight: that is a lovely poem as well, beautiful and magical paints a pretty picture!
IdrilFalastari:Lovely as well! It's so like...I dont know..its so pretty! It's like...woosh! I dont know I cant explain it...great job though!
Lady Alias:I really like yours too! It's kinda sad and cute! It's so adorable! It was so nice!
I'm sorry I cant express myself right you guys...but I love all of them, I knoe Im missing a couple people because I kinda skimmed through the first page. If you still need judges though..Im here! _________________ <center> 
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2005, 8:04 pm |
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LOL thank-you! I know exactly what you mean. (I think.)
Mrs.gamgee wrote: It's so like...I dont know..its so pretty! It's like...woosh! _________________ <a href="http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/?action=view¤t=StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" target="_blank"><img src="http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y151/IdrilFalastari/StrangerThanYouDreamtit.png" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2005, 8:28 pm |
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Idril:Ok...good
I might write a little something, but dont count on it too much so if I dont get anything in by the deadline time then just go ahead with out me. _________________ <center>
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