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Writing Contest | Round 1 | Voting *Closed*
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Author:  Turwaithiel Rochben [ May 5th, 2007, 3:13 pm ]
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Here are my votes:

1. Entry Three
2. Entry One
3. Entry Four
4. Entry Two
Author:  Meldawen [ May 6th, 2007, 5:53 pm ]
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Not to be picky...but lol, how did you vote for Entry 3 twice?
Author:  Turwaithiel Rochben [ May 6th, 2007, 6:09 pm ]
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oops!!! Let me edit that....:blush:
Author:  Elenya [ May 6th, 2007, 8:05 pm ]
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Great entries! I liked reading all of them!

1. Entry four
2. Entry two
3. Entry three
4. Entry one
Author:  Valera Elenhathel [ May 7th, 2007, 8:05 pm ]
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Comments:

Entry One - good concept. (I'm going to do some criticism now, please don't feel bad) The actual execution needs to be rethought, though. It makes for an almost monotonous read - mix up the sentence structure from noun-verb, noun-verb. Good detailing, though.

Entry Two - again, good concept, but having a monologue as the body makes the piece seem like a contrived frame for a patriotic essay.

Entry Three - mmm, nice. It doesn't 'feel' canonically consistent, but a nice way of working the description.

Entry Four - effective, good job!

my vote:
1. Entry Four
2. Entry Three
3. Entry Two
4. Entry One
Author:  Turwaithiel Rochben [ May 7th, 2007, 8:06 pm ]
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^ BLASTOFF!!! lol
Author:  Linwe Galathil [ May 8th, 2007, 12:30 pm ]
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lol Turwaithiel :P

Eee thanks for the votes everyone - and for the comments Valera :D Obviously you don't know which one I wrote and I can't say which either lol but thanks anyway :D

*shuts up before she gives the game away*
Author:  Turwaithiel Rochben [ May 11th, 2007, 6:04 pm ]
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Another round! *squee!!!*
Author:  Firiel [ May 11th, 2007, 6:55 pm ]
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1. Entry 4--Very nice job! Believable and touching.
2. Entry 3--Good job as well. I liked your description a lot. It was very vivid. A few technical details bumped you down to second, but you did very well.
3. Entry 1--I liked your idea a lot. The thoughts of the man seemed realistic and it was very memorable. As Valera said, your sentence structure could be more varied, but good job all the same.
4. Entry 2--I liked your description of Osigiliath. For whatever reason, using Faramir and Pippin as your characters didn't work for me. Your Faramir has a strong voice, which is a good thing, but it is naturally a different voice than Tolkien's. I think it would have been better if you had created your own characters.

Good job everyone, I enjoyed reading your entries.
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