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| Author: | Myra [ August 9th, 2005, 6:11 am ] |
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©{??e12 entries The poem: Shouldn't be too long, but also not just a 3-liner. I won't say more...you're the artists 
Use: I'd like to open a poetry section on my site.....So I'd like to post your poems there. Please tell me if that's ok. Needed: I need 3 judges to help me with the judgement, because Poetry is something difficult to judge. enjoy 
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| Author: | Linariel [ August 9th, 2005, 7:44 am ] |
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I can judge if you want. 
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| Author: | Dreia [ August 9th, 2005, 10:54 am ] |
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The Fading of Lothlorien Turn, my child look and see for years shall pass and all of this shall be but memory. Breathe deep the air, listen for the brook. If thou turn’st away All shall leave before thou can’st take another look. Behold the wondrous trees and hear the singing of the wren All shall fadewhen Altariel leaves her lofty fen. I'mnot too good at poetry, and I'm not sure if this is what you were looking for. (It has to do with LotR) If not, tell me and I'll help judge instead ^_^ |
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| Author: | Tanthoronial [ August 9th, 2005, 1:55 pm ] |
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Well... this was a poem I made a long time ago, for a contest on another site... I really like it Blissful Repose She lies there peacefully her sapphire eyes hidden from sight the sun shines down distractingly for its a long wait for night Her golden hair streams around the perfect head rosy lips don't emit her hidden smile she lies on ground she was never meant to tread down there she could stay for quite awhile Milky feathers soft as a cloud they fold around her body protectively the trees create an extra shroud they leave a cylinder like a forest chimney Many watch over during her slumber Nymphs and Fairies watch silently in their sight she shines like a fiery ember as she lies there peacefully Here's the picture I wrote the poem for... If you want. I think it's beautiful! http://tinypic.com/aa7ndt.jpg (I love that pic!) Its fine with me if you use my poem on your site! Good luck with the contest!! |
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| Author: | Dreia [ August 9th, 2005, 3:54 pm ] |
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Wow, Tanthoronial, that's really good! |
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| Author: | Arien Elensar [ August 9th, 2005, 5:03 pm ] |
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Oh! Save me a spot please! |
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| Author: | Arien Elensar [ August 9th, 2005, 5:08 pm ] |
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Here's my entrie. It's not very serious or mysterious. I wanted something more easy going this time: Tales There are tales of day and tales of night, Tales of love and tales of fright. Tales of day like gurgling streams, Colorful buds and grasses of green; Bright blue skies and summery dreams. Each a cheerful golden ray, from Daystars fiery lay. Tales of night like velvet blue, Purely white and silvery moon; Starlight dancing upon the shore, pleasant dreams to thee bore. Each a precious little star, and star, a glittering gem. Tales of love like gentle doves Blossoming hearts and whispered words; Bitter-sweet; fair and true, Each a silken petal, upon loves great rose. Tales of fright like looming shadows, Darkened rooms and heavy sorrows; Crawling creatures, beating hearts; murky lakes and fitful starts, Each a darkened menacing cape, and cape, a poisonous drop. Each alike and each unique Be stilling wonders, chilling dreams; Unfolding secrets to curious eyes, unraveling worlds of tremendous size, Each; a simple and cunning thought. |
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| Author: | Myra [ August 9th, 2005, 7:07 pm ] |
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Wonderful poems so far!! 
Tanthoronial: Interesting procedure. Nice pic indeed.
Linariel: Sure....thanks!
Arien & Dreia: Well I love the poems...
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| Author: | Linariel [ August 9th, 2005, 7:17 pm ] |
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Your welcome glad to help!
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| Author: | Elberethsq [ August 9th, 2005, 7:40 pm ] |
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May I be a judge too? Please? 
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| Author: | Arien Elensar [ August 10th, 2005, 12:21 am ] |
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Thanks Myra! I'm glad you like it.
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| Author: | Myra [ August 10th, 2005, 11:10 am ] |
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Elberethsq: sure...thank you!
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| Author: | Elberethsq [ August 10th, 2005, 6:10 pm ] |
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Oh - Myra - I have a question on the judging. How are we going to discuss the winners? Through private messenging?
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| Author: | Tanthoronial [ August 10th, 2005, 6:44 pm ] |
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Thanks Dreia!! I love how you used word's like thou, turn'st, can'st and wren, i've never been able to write like that!! I love your poem! I'm not very good at writing poems that don't rhyme... hehe Arien Elensar, I love your first two lines, that's totally awesome. And then you go and write a stanza for each. I love it! You also didn't rhyme words, I can never get my poems to do that... they naturally rhyme.. hehe Good Luck both of you!! |
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| Author: | Elberethsq [ August 10th, 2005, 6:57 pm ] |
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Tanthoronial wrote: Thanks Dreia!! I love how you used word's like thou, turn'st, can'st and wren, i've never been able to write like that!! I love your poem! I'm not very good at writing poems that don't rhyme... hehe
Arien Elensar, I love your first two lines, that's totally awesome. And then you go and write a stanza for each. I love it! You also didn't rhyme words, I can never get my poems to do that... they naturally rhyme.. hehe Good Luck both of you!! I would like to mention to you, Tanthoronial, that it was very kind of you to praise the entries of other contestants. Many thanks. It's nice to see really really good behavior here.
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| Author: | Arien Elensar [ August 10th, 2005, 7:00 pm ] |
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Tanthoronial wrote: Thanks Dreia!! I love how you used word's like thou, turn'st, can'st and wren, i've never been able to write like that!! I love your poem! I'm not very good at writing poems that don't rhyme... hehe
Arien Elensar, I love your first two lines, that's totally awesome. And then you go and write a stanza for each. I love it! You also didn't rhyme words, I can never get my poems to do that... they naturally rhyme.. hehe Good Luck both of you!! thank you so much! I'm glad you noticed my intention. Yeah, rhyming isn't my greatest strength either. I lvoed your poem it had a nice mood to it and the pic is gorgeous!
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