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OMG!!! I can't believe I never saw this thread!!! MUST JOIN!!!!!! :-D I LOVE POETRY!! :) 8)

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welcome, pip&leggy!

Arawn, inspiration really is hard to come by. not only does the inspiration have to be heartening, it has to be strong enough to make you want to write something.

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thanks! :) & I agree w/ that!! :-D

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Btw, this is i believe the last day of a poetry contest (or it might be the second-to-last...i'm not sure) which P&Lluvr started. (If you don't mind me mentioning it here. ;) ) Here's the link. (I was told it could be something you've already written prior to this, so don't panic, lol.)

http://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/viewtop ... sc&start=0

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yep! this is true!!! :-D Plz join!!! :bye2:

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I have to join..may I plz?


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Sure, welcome to the club Lady Eowyn!

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Yes, welcome. :)
All right, i was asked on a different thread to post this poem here (i couldn't do it there since it didn't concern what the thread was about), so...here goes. If you're wondering why i sound so nervous, it's because this is one of my earliest poems/songs, so...i didn't have the knowledge of poem-writing that I do now. ;) I mean, i don't think it's worthless...but still, posting it is slightly nervewracking.
Now, for what (finally :P ) it's about. *ta-dum* Well, my first ever song about Arwen (from her point of view, actually--as opposed to a narrative) was written to the tune of...Jingle Bells. :hide: (Well, i wrote it at Christmas time. I think.) The first part is to the verse tune, and the second part is to the chorus tune. The little bit in the middle is a bridge to sort of...explain things. Let's see, i hope i can remember it all...

Make ready, Aragorn--
The time now is at hand:
Soon the War will be
Raging throughout the land:
If the Ring's destroyed,
Then perhaps we'll win--
Either all hopes must blossom now
Or none ever bloom again.

Oh, if it comes to pass..

Wedding bells, Men and Elves
Coming together again:
When all is well, come to Rivendell--
The celebration will begin!

(If you're wondering why she says 'come to Rivendell' when in reality she went to Gondor, it's because i wrote it before i'd finished reading LotR. ;) )

Now, for a more recent poem, to get my self-esteem back up. :P Lol, just kidding, but here it is. It's Stanza III of a long alliterative poem about the whole Mount Doom episode. I posted a bit from near the end a while back, i think. I hope you like it. :)

Together they toiled through terror and torment--
Sam led one he loved unto life's end and Last Goal:
Frodo slipped on a stone, in the soot downward sliding,
And fell in the filth where his footstep had foundered--
On the hard, barren heights in the heart of Death-horror,
In the dust of Mount Doom, eyes dark and soul dying.

He lifted his eyes to look on his long goal,
And grasped at a rock, his resolve unrelenting:
Unceasing to strive--now outstretched in the soil--
Fulfilling his faith with Free Folk--but he faltered:
Exhauted, strenth ebbing, his errantry ended--
The Questor collapsed neath the Curse that he carried.

Though final gasp failed, his friend came to find him,
Who'd so often saved him with sensible sweetness:
About that thin body, beloved and broken,
Sam's arms were fast anchored, as he rocked him, heart aching:
His darling daydreamer shunned down-to-earth dealing,
So Sam had to help him--his hope and safe harbor.

Sam cradled his master on Mordor's dark Mountain,
Neath fell burning Fire and fumes fanning foully--
Unquenchable Hope to his heart-friend gave haven:
Half-concious, the Questor was comforted closely--
His life on Sam laid--yet to Love's voice could listen:
The Ringbearer's Road on one rocking him rested.

Softly as sunlight, Sam spoke in the silence
Of beauty and bliss, of birdsong and blossom--
A yonder they yearned for, full blest by Yavanna:
He asked one his arms held, for aught else unable,
If still he remembered, though Ring had so ravished,
A land once he'd loved--a light filled with longing.

Eyes sad, Frodo spoke, from the Sun wholly severed:
There lingered no light to one lost and so lonely--
His memory maimed, without mercy of Morning
The Dark slowly deepened to drown one defenseless:
Naught veiled the Void, by Ring's venom invaded--
Eyes fixed on his friend, he was felled by dark Fire.

Sam's tears fell in torrent, by tenderness tempered:
"The Curse I can't carry, but come, weary Questor!--
My burden you'll be, though my back should be broken:
You'll fail nor fall--at the Fire we'll finish!--
Dread nothing, my dear one." In Death's shade and darkness,
Sam lifted his loved one, to linger no longer.

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Aw. The second one is amazing, Eariel. It must be really hard to write alliterative poetry and you did an awesome job.
The first one made me laugh, because I imagined the Jingle Bells tune in my head. It's an interesting idea to choose this song :-D But it's good for one of your first poems. My first ones were worse. Believe me ;-)

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^my 1st poems were like
This is a cat
His name is Matt
He had a bat
What do u think of that!!

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Lol, thanks Forever. :P Actually, it is hard, but seemed easy in a way (at least at first) because, well, i think i'd been struggling with making rhyming poetry really mean something, not just be mindless. ;) At least, in how i viewed them--as the author, you tend to be more of a critic, sometimes. Anyway, alliterative and rhyming poetry have different strengths and difficulties.
^Pip, i like that. :P We all have to start somewhere. :)

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I'm not a member of this group? :blink: *gasp*

May I join?

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I'm sure that'd be fine. :) Welcome. Btw, I love your siggy! "tell your dreams to the moon..." 'Tis the sort of thing i would do. :P *OOh, and it's sparkly...* :-o

Edit: No one has posted since I last did! *gasp* lol :P Well, then i'll post a little something... ;)
I wrote a song yesterday (i think it was then) speaking to Amy Lee, since she's become one of my favorite singers and i like writing songs to certaing people sometimes, if you know what i mean. :blink: So, partly in honor of their new cd (The Open Door, i believe it's called) coming out--just two more days!--and partly just because i wanted to, i'm posting it here. ;) (Logical thing to do, in the poetry club... :P )

Song to Amy

Sing me a story--
Answer me this:
How do you know such beauty, pain, and understanding?
How we adore you--
Ethereal voice
That speaks for our lost hearts, their sorrows unbinding.


Silence is golden--
But dearer is mithril--
And your voice more fair than the silver Elves love:
At your song unfolding
The Universe stands still:
We love you, sweet princess--our raven-haired dove.


The World stopped to listen
When Luthien sang--
With hair like shadow, starlit eyes--more fair than the Evening:
Sweet nightingale,
Such beauty you bring--
You are our Tinuviel, melodies weaving.


Silence is golden--
But dearer is mithril--
And your voice more fair than the silver Elves love:
At your song unfolding
The Universe stands still:
We love you, sweet princess--our raven-haired dove.


Some call this dark--
Indeed, such is pain--
Through torment and sadness still reaching to Light
(Mysterious, strange, and beautiful world...)

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^that was stunning, Eariel (though I wouldn't call Amy Tinuviel, but that's my opinion :blush:)


Since this thread isn't just for our own poetry, but about poetry in general, here's one of my favourite poems. It's written by the german poet Rainer Maria Rilke, but I added an english translation that I found on the internet (though I'm not sure how good the translation is): :)


Überfließende Himmel verschwendeter Sterne

Überfließende Himmel verschwendeter Sterne
prachten über der Kümmernis. Statt in die Kissen,
weine hinauf. Hier, an dem weinenden schon,
an dem endenden Antlitz,
um sich greifend, beginnt der hin-
reißende Weltraum. Wer unterbricht,
wenn du dort hin drängst,
die Strömung? Keiner. Es sei denn,
dass du plötzlich ringst mit der gewaltigen Richtung
jener Gestirne nach dir. Atme.
Atme das Dunkel der Erde und wieder
aufschau! Wieder. Leicht und gesichtslos
lehnt sich von oben Tiefe dir an. Das gelöste
nachtenthaltne Gesicht giebt dem deinigen Raum.






Overflowing heavens of lavished stars

Overflowing heavens of lavished stars
glory above your grief. Not into your pillow:
weep upward. Here, close to your weeping face,
close to your face that is ending,
begins the expansive, ravishing, trans-
figuring world-space. Who would interrupt,
once you appear there,
that current? No one. Only yourself,
if you suddenly struggled out of the powerful impulse
of those stars streaming towards you. Breathe.
Breathe-in the darkness of earth and again
look up! Again. Airy and faceless,
from above, the depths bend toward you. The face that is
dissolved and contained in the night
will give more space to your own.

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May I join in here? I love poetry, though I'm not the best at rhyming... maybe I'll learn it in the future...

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Welcome. (I haven't always felt like i was the best at blank verse--i've only just recently started doing more of that.)
That was beautiful, Forever. I love the stars. :) (Lol, as to my own poem, i'm not even sure how much Luthien sang--she was, of course, more known for her dancing ;) --but I believe 'Tinuviel" means "nightingale", and I think in at least one version she "chanted" something that put a spell of silence on Beren...so anyway, i liked the metaphor enough to give it a shot. She did have dark hair, which is similar. :P )

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