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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2006, 2:30 am |
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Joined: 04 June 2005 Posts: 1388 Location: California
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May I join? 
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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2006, 3:44 pm |
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Joined: 09 July 2005 Posts: 9460 Location: in the temple of love
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Kémi, I´m not a huga SG fan, but this one was cool.
Legie (Itarildë), *thumbs up*
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Post subject: Posted: February 28th, 2006, 2:49 am |
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Joined: 10 June 2005 Posts: 1689 Location: Wherever Frodo is, there I'll be
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^I agree, Kemi. To me, it sounded like a concept that could be used in Christianity (my religion)--we have a lot of mystical poems  --but make no mistake, i mean that in a very complementary way.  I'm sorry if I offended anyone.  If you want to know why it reminded me of that, you could pm me and I'll tell you.
By the way, can I join?  It's a rare day that I'm not in the process of writing some poem or other (which I'll post when I have time  ). I compose like there's no tomorrow! 
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Post subject: Posted: February 28th, 2006, 1:08 pm |
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Joined: 08 June 2005 Posts: 7734 Location: Isengard
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I kinda like it, never been too good at it(I might try it out here) and my countries national epic forms out of poems...
For example this small part as Kullervo goes to war against his fathers killer.
"No, I will not go and hide;
No, this bad one will not run:
I will go to the mouth of death,
To the dark door of the grave,
To the bloody battlefields,
To the killing grounds of war-men -
Untamoinen still stands upright,
Traitorous hind as yet unconquered;
Unavenged my father's wounds,
Unrepaid my mother's tears
The poems were gathered from persons that had passed them onwards, but these days there are no true persons whom would remember them all.
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Post subject: Posted: February 28th, 2006, 2:44 pm |
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Joined: 26 February 2006 Posts: 138 Location: Portugal
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can I join??? I promise I'll be a  .
I love to write poetry!
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Post subject: Posted: March 2nd, 2006, 7:28 am |
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Joined: 25 October 2005 Posts: 1986 Location: USA, Middle Earth, LOST, Elizabethtown, anywhere I want
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I'm sure it's fine. I've never seen someone once turn down someonelse to join a club.
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Post subject: Posted: June 5th, 2006, 1:15 am |
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Joined: 10 June 2005 Posts: 1689 Location: Wherever Frodo is, there I'll be
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Seeing as that's the case, I think I'll post something and hopefully revive this club. Here's one about the Grey Havens, both at the end of rotk, and...later.
Frodo
Soft to the West--
Like a lullaby
In a child's rest--
Sweet blows the wind,
Soothing tears you cry
At our journey's end:
Watch the Sea
Turn to beckoning gold:
Smile for me--
In my heart thine I hold.
With West-bound tide and East-borne wind,
The sails fill, the moorings bend--
Bright-heaven's wings my soul they lend,
Yet to Earth I look, to my dearest friend.
Sam
Light as a dove,
I will soar to you
On wings of love:
Sweetest command--
More than all I knew,
Came friendship's hand.
Call to me--
I will hear you in dreams!--
To cross the Sea,
When the Lonely Star gleams:
Only call me in the pathless night--
Frodo
I'll be haven to my bird's last flight:
Sam
In my tears there glimmers starry white--
Frodo
Don't weep, my friend--I seek the Light!
Long afterward
Frodo
Long did you love
She that flew away--
A snow-white dove:
Hear my command--
Come beyond the spray,
And take my hand:
Look to Sea--
Time has set your release!--
Soar to me,
Finding joy born of peace.
Sam
My grief is dark when Light is done--
Frodo
Seek out the Road with Dawn begun!--
Sam
Unto your voice I'll gladly run--
Frodo
You fill my heart, sweet golden Sun!
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Post subject: Posted: June 5th, 2006, 1:08 pm |
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Joined: 05 June 2005 Posts: 794 Location: Greenwood the Great Country:
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I yea I'm so happy because I finished some more of my poems, and I three more!!!
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Post subject: Posted: June 5th, 2006, 1:55 pm |
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Joined: 12 May 2006 Posts: 473 Location: Comyn Castle, Thendara City
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A poetry club!! *dances around room* Can I join?? I've written loads of poetry and I'll post some asap.
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Post subject: Posted: June 6th, 2006, 12:49 am |
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Joined: 10 June 2005 Posts: 1689 Location: Wherever Frodo is, there I'll be
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Welcome!  I like your siggy quote.
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Post subject: Posted: June 6th, 2006, 5:46 am |
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Joined: 19 September 2005 Posts: 3891 Location: Middle-earth
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EarielMaurwen wrote: Seeing as that's the case, I think I'll post something and hopefully revive this club. Here's one about the Grey Havens, both at the end of rotk, and...later. Frodo Soft to the West-- Like a lullaby In a child's rest-- Sweet blows the wind, Soothing tears you cry At our journey's end: Watch the Sea Turn to beckoning gold: Smile for me-- In my heart thine I hold. With West-bound tide and East-borne wind, The sails fill, the moorings bend-- Bright-heaven's wings my soul they lend, Yet to Earth I look, to my dearest friend. Sam Light as a dove, I will soar to you On wings of love: Sweetest command-- More than all I knew, Came friendship's hand. Call to me-- I will hear you in dreams!-- To cross the Sea, When the Lonely Star gleams: Only call me in the pathless night-- Frodo I'll be haven to my bird's last flight: Sam In my tears there glimmers starry white-- Frodo Don't weep, my friend--I seek the Light! Long afterwardFrodo Long did you love She that flew away-- A snow-white dove: Hear my command-- Come beyond the spray, And take my hand: Look to Sea-- Time has set your release!-- Soar to me, Finding joy born of peace. Sam My grief is dark when Light is done-- Frodo Seek out the Road with Dawn begun!-- Sam Unto your voice I'll gladly run-- Frodo You fill my heart, sweet golden Sun!
Eariel, that is so beautiful! One of the best poems about the Grey Havens that I've ever read.
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Post subject: Posted: June 6th, 2006, 10:52 am |
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Joined: 12 May 2006 Posts: 473 Location: Comyn Castle, Thendara City
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This poem is called Lothlórien (at the End of the 4th Age)
Silence
Only birds disrupt the silence
Night
We only have the moon for little guidance
Silence
Not a deathly silence, but of life
Water
Guarantees us life, but also death
Silence
Lulling silence, making you forget the dangers
Hope
A thing you gather here along the way
Silence
Helping you relax and find your centre
Rest
Showing what to do, how to go on
Silence
Element of Light, of Dark, of Slumber
Mirror
Showing you what is, what was and will be
Silence
Takes the place of ancient, deceased gaiety
Elves
Welcomed you to rest and peace and hope
Silence
Welcoming and yet somehow repulsive
Cobwebs
Take the place of former present light
Silence
The Age of Elves is past
Away
From the Grey Havens they sailed to join their kin
Galadriel
Travelled far away Lady of Adamant
And in Lothlórien now presides just
Silence
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Post subject: Posted: June 6th, 2006, 11:56 am |
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Joined: 30 March 2006 Posts: 5406 Location: Alabama, USA
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may i join? i love writeing poetry when the mood hits me!
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Post subject: Posted: June 7th, 2006, 10:28 pm |
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Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 2087 Location: The Treasure State Country:
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Hi! Can I join? I took a poetry class a year ago and enjoyed it. I love editing poems and such, it's a weird thing I like to do....strange I know...
At my school I won a prize for editor's choice poetry in our school literary book....So I got my poem published on the first page, and here is the poem :
Tibet
Secluded in the mountains
of Tibet, an orange clad monk
drifts through stone halls.
Incense of exotic flowers
wafts in the air,
disclosing secrets of eternity.
Colossal gongs
reverberate in hidden
valley passes.
A goat herder lifts
his head in recognition.
I descend the stone steps
of the moss covered temple
into a garden.
Pale pink blossoms
peek from beneath
Sheltering leaves.
My steps are muffled
by emerald grass
blanketing the ground
before me.
In my path ahead,
a monk kneels beneath
a vast tree. The gnarled
branches form a protective
shelter around him.
Monks in ginger robes
appear like marble statues,
meditating beneath
trees. An eternity passes.
Wind from the east
rustles the leaves.
A single leaf breaks free
from a constricting branch
and drifts to the earth.
When the gong echoes again,
I watch the monks
rise in unison
and enter the temple
their heads bowed.
Ah yes, there it is....Hmm...it's kind of weird to read it again, because I haven't read it in awhile 
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Post subject: Posted: June 8th, 2006, 12:44 am |
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Joined: 10 June 2005 Posts: 1689 Location: Wherever Frodo is, there I'll be
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^I like that. My mom visited Tibet at least once, so although I've only ever heard about it (as opposed to going there myself), it's kind of nostalgic.
Forever: Thank you. *blushes* I've written loads about the Grey Havens, so I guess I have practice. That and Mount Doom are two of my biggest lotr poetry topics.
Arawn: You're welcome!
I wrote one about Lothlorien too, awhile back.
Bright is air and blossoming bough
Where the leaves are wrought of singing gold.
All remembered of then is now,
And the forest lovely to behold.
Amidst lights in the Elvish city fair
On silver trunk and golden wing
The Lord and Lady in bright hall dwell there
And like the golden rain Elves sing
Wise and fair as the setting sun
Queen Galadriel of the Elven-ring
High Celeborn of Lothlorien
A great Lord and an Elven-king
Bittersweet is this coming day
When setting is Lothlorien's star
Much that is fair must soon pass away
And the Elves must journey to lands afar
Still Nimrodel flows sweet and clear
By bough of gold and trunk of grey
But long have the Elves known their hour was near,
And to the West have long since sailed away.
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Post subject: Posted: June 8th, 2006, 4:23 am |
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Joined: 19 September 2005 Posts: 3891 Location: Middle-earth
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A poem for J.R.R. Tolkien I wrote some time ago. It's not very good, because it's still a bit hard for me to write poems in English.
For all you have written
For all the stories you told
I want to thank you
For the worlds you created
Worlds, unlike our one will ever be
I want to thank you
For the beauty you gave us
Beauty beyond words
I want to thank you
I wish I could express
what your books mean to me
I wish I had met you once
Thank you
Mr Tolkien
I'm not sure if the grammar is correct
Eariel, I'd love to read one of your poems about Mount Doom. You're so talented!
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