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Post subject: The Writer's Club Posted: March 12th, 2006, 7:39 pm |
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This club is for anyone who enjoys writing. Get together with other writers and share your writing, discuss your favorite writers, and have fun!
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Post subject: Posted: March 12th, 2006, 8:07 pm |
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let me be the first to join! I love writing and this is a great club idea
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Post subject: Posted: March 12th, 2006, 8:13 pm |
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Joined: 10 December 2005 Posts: 1317 Location: Watching you. ALL THE TIME.
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Post subject: Posted: March 12th, 2006, 10:06 pm |
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Joined: 25 October 2005 Posts: 1986 Location: USA, Middle Earth, LOST, Elizabethtown, anywhere I want
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Ohhhh, *jumps up and down w/ hand raised* Pick me, pick me! I love to write!
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Post subject: Posted: March 12th, 2006, 10:10 pm |
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Joined: 10 December 2005 Posts: 1317 Location: Watching you. ALL THE TIME.
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Welcome to the club!
Here's the first part of the story I'm writing. Tell me what you think, okay?
The casket lowered into the grave, and Lynn choked back a sob. A mist hung around the almost deserted cemetery in a low cloud, chilling the funeral attendees to the bone. Headstones loomed out of the mist, and gnarled trees took on the shape of men, their knotty limbs reaching out at the people gathered around the grave like clawed hands yearning to break free and rend at their faces and arms. The October sky was hard and cold, the silver clouds covering the face of the sun and denying warmth from reaching the cold ground below. Lynn’s voice was full of tears and she recited with the rest of the congregation.
“Our Father, who art in heaven, Hallowed be thy Name. Thy kingdom come. Thy will be done, On earth as it is in heaven. Give us this day our daily bread. And forgive us our trespasses, As we forgive those who trespass against us. And lead us not into temptation, But deliver us from evil. For thine is the kingdom, and the power, and the glory, for ever and ever. Amen.”
Tears slid down her face, as sat on her cheeks, glistening in the insubstantial light like diamonds. She felt Adrien put his arms around her, kissing the top her head, ignoring the tears on his own face. The group of people thinned, and the grave was filled with dirt. This more than anything gave finality to the things that had happened in the last few days. In her heart, she had been hoping that it would just be a joke, or a bad dream. But as the grave was filled in, the shock of Mabel’s passing really fell on Lynn for the first time. She turned and cried into Adrien’s shoulder. He put his arms around Lynn, attempting comforting words.
“Shhh. Lynn, it’s alright. It’ll be alright.” he said, stroking her long auburn hair.
“Why did she do it Adrien? Why on earth did she do it?” sobbed Lynn. All she could think of was the phone call that she and Adrien had received two days earlier. The words of Mabel’s mother, so full of tears and sorrow, still rang in her ears.
“Lynn? I have some bad news.” said Mrs. Thompson. Her voice was quavering and hoarse, as though she had been crying recently, and was in danger of doing so again.
“Oh, hi Mrs. Thompson. What’s wrong?” asked Lynn, a look of concern on her face.
“It’s Mabel.” the noise of a nose being blown reached Lynn’s ears. She heard Mrs. Thompson clear her throat. “She… she took her life.”
“What?” said Lynn, stunned. No, no it wasn’t true. It couldn’t be true.
“If you would come down here, I would appreciate it immensely. I know that you and Adrien were Mabel’s best friends. It would mean a lot to me and my husband.”
“Of-of course.” said Lynn, and she heard the phone click off on the other end. The phone slipped from her hands and fell to the floor with a thunk. The events after that were blurred. And though she had been extremely upset before now, it had only really sunk in as the casket lowered into the grave.
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Post subject: Posted: March 12th, 2006, 10:14 pm |
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Joined: 25 October 2005 Posts: 1986 Location: USA, Middle Earth, LOST, Elizabethtown, anywhere I want
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OMG! I was blown away by the first couple of sentences. That was amazing. I give it 3 thumbs up! *if that's possible*
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Post subject: Posted: March 12th, 2006, 10:16 pm |
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Joined: 10 December 2005 Posts: 1317 Location: Watching you. ALL THE TIME.
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Thanks! ^_^ It's going to be about a girl (Maybel) who was murdered, but they though that she committed suicide, and now her ghost is trying to contact her friends.
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Post subject: Posted: March 13th, 2006, 10:59 am |
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That is a very interesting plot, one that I love! Great beginning to the story, your descriptions were wonderful
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 6:07 pm |
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Joined: 25 October 2005 Posts: 1986 Location: USA, Middle Earth, LOST, Elizabethtown, anywhere I want
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I would post some of my story, but it's kind of hard to follow at first. And i'm still trying to make it sound good with out ruining what i'm trying to achieve. *scratches chin and goes into deep concentration.*
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 6:28 pm |
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I love writing!! I'm currently working on plotline.
I try to write as often as possible.
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 6:42 pm |
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Joined: 03 June 2005 Posts: 8105 Location: The United States of America
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Oh! I'll join! I love to write so much. If only I had more time for pleasure writing...
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 7:27 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 7:45 pm |
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Joined: 03 June 2005 Posts: 2141 Location: Davenport, Iowa
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I'll join!
I'm working on a novel right now, and I jhope to get it published someday.
Although I have to live with knowing that my hand, which was not connected to the brain at the time and was writing was it wnated to, has made the story flow in such a way that several important characters now have to die in order for it to work. >.<
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 11:00 pm |
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Joined: 10 December 2005 Posts: 1317 Location: Watching you. ALL THE TIME.
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Welcome to the club!
I have quite a few novels in the works at the moment. I start about three at a time, so if I get stuck I have something else to work on. I have a fantasy, about an elf with hidden powers who's being hunted by an evil wizard (unnamed as of yet), one about two teenages in England who fall into some sort of mirror world called the Phoenix Stone, the one seen above (also unnamed), and another one, about a man who's sent to a haunted insane asylum for a crime he didn't commit.
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 1:10 am |
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Joined: 11 August 2005 Posts: 1303 Location: Earth
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ooo I'll join... I love writing!
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 9:43 pm |
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