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Author: | Drew's Destiny [ November 6th, 2006, 12:38 pm ] |
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Does anybody else here write songs? Feel like sharing the lyrics? If you do then feel free to post them here. |
Author: | FRODOFAN [ November 10th, 2006, 1:33 pm ] |
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Absolutely. I'm actually hoping to start a band soon. I'd really like to start out with the epiphone SG guitar. Here's one of my songs: chorus I adore The way we like the same things I adore The way your love gives me wings So I'm flying like an angel but not acting quite so. I'm like a bat out of heaven Whooaa... :scream: verse 1 Your crazy eyes of mystery Have got me guessing all your thoughts Your pretty smile is killing me I'm gonna give you all I've got Cause I adore you I adore you I adore (echo X3) you! chorus I adore The way we like the same things I adore The way your love gives me wings So I'm flying like an angel but not acting quite so. I'm like a bat out of heaven Whooaa... :scream: verse 2 The way you talk is getting me I think I'm loosing all my mind To silly thoughts and dreams of you I can't believe that you are mine Cause I adore you I adore you I adore (echo X3) you! bridge I adore you... oh I adore you I adore you, yes I adore you I adore adore adore ado-o-o-o-re you! chorus I adore The way we like the same things I adore The way your love gives me wings So I'm flying like an angel but not acting quite so. I'm like a bat out of heaven Whooaa... :scream: --- What about you? Have you written any lyrics? |
Author: | Altariel Frodo [ November 10th, 2006, 1:46 pm ] |
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I've written some song lyrics, but they're all really, really Christian, so I'm not sure if anyone would appreiciate me posting them... |
Author: | Drew's Destiny [ November 12th, 2006, 12:41 pm ] |
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FRODOFAN, Very good song lyrics. (two thumbs) Do you like rock? Yeah, I've written some song lyrics. Altariel Frodo, Well, if you're worried about getting in trouble over putting them on the board or whatever. You could totally pm them to me. 'Cause I would Love to read them and I know that that isn't against any board rules and that shouldn't make anybody mad. So if you want to just pm them to me. Here's one of my song's lyrics. I got the idea for it from PotC's Will and his dad. I'm fighting my fears I'm hiding my tears I want to understand But there's no reply (Chorus) So tell me why Why did you leave me Why did you decieve me Why didn't I matter What was it about her (Longer than normal pause here) Why didn't you love me This is where I have to be 'Cause I just can't bare to leave But I have to know (Repeat chorus) You leaft my mom and me For the sea who you call a she And it's more than just annoying me (Repeat chorus) I hope you liked it okay. I have some other song lyrics but I think I'll wait untill later to post them. |
Author: | FRODOFAN [ November 12th, 2006, 6:10 pm ] |
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Thanks! Love rock... Alternative! Punk... all that great stuff. Glad you liked the lyrics. I like yours also. They're nicely done. Have any more? |
Author: | Drew's Destiny [ November 13th, 2006, 2:09 pm ] |
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FRODOFAN, Your welcome. That's realy cool. I had a feeling that you were into all of that cool stuff. Thanks. Yeah, I have other songs. What about you? Do you have anymore songs? I would love to read some more of your lyrics. Here's another song that I wrote... Sometimes you can't have the ones you love You think your love's gonna be enough But on the weekend where's she been No, boy you haven't sinned (Chorus) Point is is she going to be there for you Point is is she going to love you too Point is is she going to be true I just don't want to see you end up used It's not your fault that her heart isn't true But he has keys to doors you've never seen before (Repeat chorus) She says that she's changed But it's realy all the same (Repeat chorus) |
Author: | FRODOFAN [ November 13th, 2006, 11:29 pm ] |
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That's cool. It sort of has a punk rock feeling to me. Thanks. Yeah, I've written... aahh... countless things. I have an account at allpoetry.com where I post most of my poems and lyrics. Here's a pretty good one I dug out for you. It's called, "Frozen Tears." chorus: I watched, as the snowflakes fell, Burning in my freezing hell As you loved her in my stead And I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead Crying in an endless fear - My face all stained by my frozen tears. verse 1: I stood in solitude Shaded by the brittle trees Hoping you would change your mind, Help me up from my numb knees. But you didn't notice me You just let me freeze You just left me on my own To die... To die in the cold. chorus: I watched, as the snowflakes fell, Burning in my freezing hell As you loved her in my stead And I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead Crying in an endless fear - My face all stained by my frozen tears. verse 2: I watched in constant pain Drowning in my bitter grief Wishing you would come to me, Be my light and my relief, But you didn't even see God! you were a thief. You stole my heart, tore my life Left me... Left me in my strife chorus: I watched, as the snowflakes fell, Burning in my freezing hell As you loved her in my stead And I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead Crying in an endless fear - My face all stained by my frozen tears. bridge: Why did I love you? You with a heart of ice... Why did I love you? You with a heart of ice... Why did I love you? You with a heart of ice..... Why did I love you?! For I watched, as the snowflakes fell, Burning in my freezing hell And you loved her in my stead While I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead And I CRIED in an endless fear - My face all stained by my frozen tears That YOU caused.. That YOU caused... My face all stained by the frozen tears... that you caused... |
Author: | Drew's Destiny [ November 16th, 2006, 1:11 pm ] |
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^Wow that was great. You realy do have a talent for this. You should totally go for that band thing. Thanks. |
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