That's cool. It sort of has a punk rock feeling to me.

Thanks. Yeah, I've written... aahh... countless things. I have an account at allpoetry.com where I post most of my poems and lyrics.
Here's a pretty good one I dug out for you. It's called, "Frozen Tears."
chorus:
I watched, as the snowflakes fell,
Burning in my freezing hell
As you loved her in my stead
And I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead
Crying in an endless fear -
My face all stained by my frozen tears.
verse 1:
I stood in solitude
Shaded by the brittle trees
Hoping you would change your mind,
Help me up from my numb knees.
But you didn't notice me
You just let me freeze
You just left me on my own
To die...
To die in the cold.
chorus:
I watched, as the snowflakes fell,
Burning in my freezing hell
As you loved her in my stead
And I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead
Crying in an endless fear -
My face all stained by my frozen tears.
verse 2:
I watched in constant pain
Drowning in my bitter grief
Wishing you would come to me,
Be my light and my relief,
But you didn't even see
God! you were a thief.
You stole my heart, tore my life
Left me...
Left me in my strife
chorus:
I watched, as the snowflakes fell,
Burning in my freezing hell
As you loved her in my stead
And I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead
Crying in an endless fear -
My face all stained by my frozen tears.
bridge:
Why did I love you? You with a heart of ice...
Why did I love you? You with a heart of ice...
Why did I love you? You with a heart of ice.....
Why did I love you?!
For
I watched, as the snowflakes fell,
Burning in my freezing hell
And you loved her in my stead
While I begged, on my knees, that I'd fall down dead
And I CRIED in an endless fear -
My face all stained by my frozen tears
That YOU caused..
That YOU caused...
My face all stained by the frozen tears...
that you caused...