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Author:  Jax Nova [ January 17th, 2007, 12:33 pm ]
Post subject:  I Love You
Well, I don't usually write free verse but that is just how this one turned out. Hope you all like it.


Something,
Nothing,
One thing,
Everything.

A kaleidoscope of good and evil,
That spirals down the banks of the rivers.
It turns the waters to blood,
And none escape it's claws.

Death,
Life,
Barely living,
Barely dead.

A haunting image of love and hate,
A bleeding image of sorrow cold.
But on it's tongue are words so cruel,
As it bends down and whispers, "I love You."
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 21st, 2007, 9:02 pm ]
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i like it....a lot....it's very....idk, interesting. u dont usually do free verse...i think this is the 1st 1 that i've ever read that u've done, & i really like it...i luv how it ends w/ i luv you....-shivers- it gives me chills....excellent job, as usual. ;) keep it up :)
Author:  Annabel Lee [ January 21st, 2007, 9:25 pm ]
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Jax... why did you put this in the Misc. Randomness....
Author:  Jax Nova [ January 22nd, 2007, 1:30 pm ]
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Thanks pip. :) Glad you liked it. Like I said though... it just kind of flowed out that way so i wrote it down in free verse. And I do believe that it is the first one I have done.


Weeziey wrote:
Jax... why did you put this in the Misc. Randomness....


..... I saw that in here and asked myself the same question.... I was sure I posted this in the poetry section. Yeah shows you what a 3 nights lack of sleep can do for you!

I guess I will ost../. RE- post it in the poery sction. (just wait some how it will end up being the LOTR_RPG section... *sighs* gish...
Author:  The Nightingale [ January 22nd, 2007, 2:55 pm ]
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That was confusing. But really neat at the same time.

Like me. Minus the neat part.
Author:  Lothiriel [ January 23rd, 2007, 5:11 am ]
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I really liked it in a weird kind of way. The way you ended it, it gave me creeps.*shivers* It was nice though.

Image
Author:  Ardanwen [ January 25th, 2007, 2:48 pm ]
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I like it... just beautiful... just a little bit.. ehm... weird? strange?
what ever. I like it! :-D
Author:  Jax Nova [ January 26th, 2007, 1:23 pm ]
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lol yeah, it is a bit strange I will admit that....

But I am strange so I am told and I always like strange things *shrugs* Strange isn't it? lol ok shutting my trap now,

But glad you all liked it!
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 28th, 2007, 5:47 pm ]
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Rnt we all strange, though? :) if we werent, we'd be.....normal. ew. tee hee. once again, great poem Jax. keep it up ;)
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