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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 17th, 2007, 12:33 pm ] |
| Post subject: | I Love You |
Well, I don't usually write free verse but that is just how this one turned out. Hope you all like it. Something, Nothing, One thing, Everything. A kaleidoscope of good and evil, That spirals down the banks of the rivers. It turns the waters to blood, And none escape it's claws. Death, Life, Barely living, Barely dead. A haunting image of love and hate, A bleeding image of sorrow cold. But on it's tongue are words so cruel, As it bends down and whispers, "I love You." |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 21st, 2007, 9:02 pm ] |
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i like it....a lot....it's very....idk, interesting. u dont usually do free verse...i think this is the 1st 1 that i've ever read that u've done, & i really like it...i luv how it ends w/ i luv you....-shivers- it gives me chills....excellent job, as usual.  keep it up 
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ January 21st, 2007, 9:25 pm ] |
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Jax... why did you put this in the Misc. Randomness.... |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 22nd, 2007, 1:30 pm ] |
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Thanks pip. Glad you liked it. Like I said though... it just kind of flowed out that way so i wrote it down in free verse. And I do believe that it is the first one I have done.
Weeziey wrote: Jax... why did you put this in the Misc. Randomness....
..... I saw that in here and asked myself the same question.... I was sure I posted this in the poetry section. Yeah shows you what a 3 nights lack of sleep can do for you! I guess I will ost../. RE- post it in the poery sction. (just wait some how it will end up being the LOTR_RPG section... *sighs* gish... |
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| Author: | The Nightingale [ January 22nd, 2007, 2:55 pm ] |
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That was confusing. But really neat at the same time. Like me. Minus the neat part. |
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| Author: | Lothiriel [ January 23rd, 2007, 5:11 am ] |
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I really liked it in a weird kind of way. The way you ended it, it gave me creeps.*shivers* It was nice though. 
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| Author: | Ardanwen [ January 25th, 2007, 2:48 pm ] |
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I like it... just beautiful... just a little bit.. ehm... weird? strange? what ever. I like it! 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 26th, 2007, 1:23 pm ] |
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lol yeah, it is a bit strange I will admit that.... But I am strange so I am told and I always like strange things *shrugs* Strange isn't it? lol ok shutting my trap now, But glad you all liked it! |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 28th, 2007, 5:47 pm ] |
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Rnt we all strange, though? if we werent, we'd be.....normal. ew. tee hee. once again, great poem Jax. keep it up
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| Author: | Rasinetranmy [ September 17th, 2025, 5:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: I Love You |
While the color is new, the watch still represents the entry point link to the unique world of Ressence, link and I can't wait to see the Type 8 in person (not to mention whatever else Ressence releases over the coming link days) at Watches and Wonders 2023. Stay tuned for a whole lot more. |
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