Will He See Me? Rated K+ (A bit depressing, but nothing violent or drug related )

This poem is about how Faramir strives for his father's love. It shows how he has always wanted his father's approval, yet somehow it always seems just out of reach.

If I am rough
If I am wild
If I am never filled with guile
If I am smart
If I am skilled
Perhaps he will set down his quill...
And see me.

If I am quiet
If I am bold
If I receive the strength of old
If I am tall
If I am stern
Then maybe he, at last, will turn...
And see me.

If I am quick
If I am proud
If I can speak the truth aloud
If I am tough
If I am wise
The maybe he will raise his eyes...
And see me.

If I am terse
If I am hard
Maybe my path will be unbarred
If I am far
If I am near
Then maybe this time he will hear...
And see me.

If I am swift
If I am clear
If I am just like Boromir
If I am calm
If I am brave
Maybe this day he'll be amazed...
And see me.

If I am lost
If I am found
Perchance he will no longer frown
If I am gone
If I am dead
May-hap he will lift up his head
And see me....

If he will think
If he will know
I wish he would remove my load
If he will call
If he will see
Maybe for once he will love me
Perhaps even smile upon me
Oh, Lord above if he will only...
Have faith in one who's lost at sea.
Will he someday turn to me?
Will he...will he truly see...
Will he see...
Me?

-Laesneniel (Faramir's scribe and true love)

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Zirakzigil ai menu Duzhuk! Zirakzigil, at your service!
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I like it. I wish there was a 'thumbs up' smiley...

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Wed Killian Jones (Captain Hook) 4/20/13

Beautiful! I almost cried.

...and like Faramir a bit more.

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this is sooooooo good (Y)

i really feel for Faramir

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The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return

Aaaaaaw! Thanks, Ladies! I didn't know if anyone would like it. I haven't written any poetry for a while so I'm a bit rusty.
Thanks again!

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Zirakzigil ai menu Duzhuk! Zirakzigil, at your service!
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I dont see any rust on you at all!

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Wed Killian Jones (Captain Hook) 4/20/13

at least you had the confidence to post it

i don't even have the balls to show my poetry pieces to any of my family members i don't like people critising my personal stuff

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The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return

Hehe! Well, there are some things I don't show people because they are just too aweful to even think about sharing. My longest poem--which is four pages long--is so stupid that I wish I had never written it!

Lithôniel: Thanks!

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Zirakzigil ai menu Duzhuk! Zirakzigil, at your service!
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Excellent poem! Gives an inward look at the man and adds a bit more of a dimension to his second-born status.

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Hanasian
Annalist, Physician, & Historian
of The Black Company of the Dúnedain,
The Free Company of Arnor
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Durian: Dúnedain Ranger of the North: Rhudaurian Lineage
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