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PostPosted: March 29th, 2006, 9:41 pm 
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Atlantis lies
under depths

glory past
long before

But under the sea
one can hear the song

The mournful melody
of greatness gone

Oh, Atlantis!
I long for you

Lost to ocean
dark and blue

Greatest of nations
under the azure skies

I reach for you
and find only ruin

But yet I still
mourn for you
Atlantis under the deep blue
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PostPosted: March 29th, 2006, 9:50 pm 
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why are you such a good writer??? :blink: i am SO jealous!! that was a truly wonderful poem!!

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It's not that I'm good, it's just I get into the right mood for it.
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well theyre still really good ;)

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I suppose, though I only rhyme occasionally.
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ooo its prettier that way! :) i love your poems!!

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