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Hi! I'd like to post my poem....it is a bit long, but...uhm....if you are brave enough to read it all, please tell me what u think:)
My last days
We were young,
Well, at least we thought we were.
Running down towards unknown,
Wind blowing in our hair,
Which were gathered together,
By our sun layers of the night.
From running to fast maybe,
I lost track somewhere on the road,
And found myself in the hospital.
They told me I wouldn't be alive for a long time;
I have only a few months to make up my mind.
The sea has always been the thing we were the most afraid of,
Well, at least we thought it was.
But was it really?
We’re always afraid of what we don’t know,
‘Till The End catches us anyway.
Two more months, then I’ll die…
The sea assumes the circle of life;
It brings back the things the way they were.
It gets salty and becomes hard,
Hurts, but we are strong enough,
Well, at least we thought we were,
One month, then I’ll die…
Mama are you here?
My echo is the unique answer.
But loudly I hear the wave’s song.
To face death,
I must be stronger,
Cause we will,
Whatever they all say,
Pass away someday.
Two weeks until the end…
The waves song?
I discovered they were souls calling.
Calling me for one last dance,
From which I shall never return.
Until the day you come along,
I may leave you.
We becomes I,
I’m going the nearest I’ve been,
To the lost but loved ones.
No longer to me they are going to be lost.
My last hour…
Goodbye,
Death has come
To carry me in a new home.
The Time is almost here,
Coming as fast as a speeding car.
For me,
But not for us,
Either nor for you.
One last second…
As my feet start to feel the waves,
I look back at you.
Standing alone,
A tear in the eye,
There you are.
Run my love, run,
Your time will come.
((Sorry...I know...it's long))
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On and on, does anybody know what we are living for? Whatever happens, we leave it all to chance...
THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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it was sad...when the "one second"...its really good Dea 
