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Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 1st, 2006, 5:04 pm ] |
Post subject: | Broken Rose, Broken Heart |
Here's a poem I wrote 4 a contest....(I had 2 put it on a banner.) the banner is @ the bottom....it's OK. ....but let me know wut u think of the poem, & the banner, 2, if u wanna comment on it. thanks guys!! ![]() ![]() I stare at the rose That lay in my hand. It’s broken in two. I just don’t understand. I thought everything was perfect; That you were the one for me. But now our love lies in pieces, Just like this rose that you see. Tears stream down my face, And I let the rose slowly fall. I bend down, and burry my face, And quietly begin to ball. I cry all night long; An uncontrollable, painful, cry. I feel so horrible; so miserable. I wish that I would die. The words you screamed echo in my head: It’s done! We’re over; we’re through! And the words that back to you I pleaded: Please, don’t go…..I love you. But you left me standing there anyway, A broken a rose in my hand. You left me there, so confused; So unable to understand. So now my sadness turns to anger; My love turns into hate. I want to hurt you; I want revenge. I want you to meet your fate. That way you can never Break another soul. You can never make another go through what I did; You can never break what’s whole. And as all these thing rush through my head, I realize that we’re really not together anymore. And so I lay there still and cry and cry. And the broken rose, lies still, on the floor. ![]() |
Author: | gollum13 [ September 2nd, 2006, 2:53 pm ] |
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That was a really wonderful poem and your banner is good work, I love it! ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 2nd, 2006, 5:12 pm ] |
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^thanks (it's a HUGE banner, isn't it? lol ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ September 4th, 2006, 11:43 am ] |
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I agree, ![]() ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 4th, 2006, 1:26 pm ] |
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thanks Jax ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 4th, 2006, 4:22 pm ] |
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I love it, Pip!! Very well done- so sad, but so pretty. And the banner is very nice too- you did a cool effect on it. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 5th, 2006, 9:12 pm ] |
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thanks! ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Eldarwen [ September 5th, 2006, 9:36 pm ] |
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I like it Pip. Its deep and thoughtful...the banner is spiffey also. Amazing... |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ September 5th, 2006, 9:39 pm ] |
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thanks! spiffey.........i like that word! almost as fun as nifty!! lol ![]() |
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