the rhythm and way the poem flows along smoothly is great. very nice!
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ September 6th, 2006, 6:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Mongols, a poem (slightly revised_ |
Can you hear the hoof beats? Can you hear the arrows? Can you see the Khan? Can you see the steppes? Below you see the horses Gray and strong and proud Atop you see the warrior His aim great and true Together they ride Across the Earth Up the mountains Over the waters The horsemen are riding All far and near. Toppling the Emperors Conquering the land Their Great Khan comes Flail of god, enemy of evil Who will contest his might? Who will stop the hordes? So they ride, sunrise to sunset The mongols |
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| Author: | Lady Dark Moon [ September 6th, 2006, 7:25 pm ] |
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the rhythm and way the poem flows along smoothly is great. very nice!
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ September 13th, 2006, 5:44 pm ] |
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No more comments....? |
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| Author: | Mornie utulie [ September 13th, 2006, 8:32 pm ] |
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i liked it! specially the end...it's very....definite 
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