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Post subject: Sepulchre's crown: a poem  Posted: September 19th, 2006, 8:53 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005
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Location: Texas
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Forth lept Jerusalem's King
Noble and proud 'top tall steed
Sword glimmering and helm tall
Cross ashine on proud chest
Lord's might none contests
His banners o'er desert lands
Gold cross on blue
The symbol of knights proud and true
Sepulchre's crown now lies in dust
Valiant sword lost to rust
Kingdom lain to all but waste
Great King Baldwin interred with haste
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Post subject: Posted: September 20th, 2006, 10:09 pm |
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Location: The Old Navy of Gondor
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Very... powerful. The scheme is pretty free, and it works really well!!! Nice poem!!! It sent shivers up my spine when I read it, and I actually had to read it twice!!! My compliments!
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Post subject: Posted: September 20th, 2006, 10:10 pm |
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Location: Texas
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Thank you, I enjoy writing poems like these about historical subjects.
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