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| Author: | Lady Dark Moon [ September 17th, 2006, 8:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Love Denied |
Caged inside From birth I was meant to die Free me from these shackles Where I've bled all my life Where I've torn out my humanity And placed it on this dark altar So that I may feel nothing Taste nothing See nothing but the world for what it is The world that turned its back on me Hunt for pain Kill for pleasure Know no compassion for fear of denial Walk the shadows of a lonely path Along the boundaries of a void That was once my soul Lacerate my trail with the scars of my past Unleash the animal raging within Incarnate in my blade piercing another victim Warmed by the blood gushing through my fingers I pacify the beast I have become With the cold hand of death Caged inside Bleed my shackles Bind my pain Love denied Love betrayed So leave me here Leave me here to carve out this hollow existence Leave me here in this recess of deepest hell Leave me here to die |
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| Author: | Seral [ September 18th, 2006, 11:23 am ] |
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That's a really strong poem.. I love the way you describe, without going over the top.. which would be rather a temptation, in this kind of subject.. But, you haven't, and that makes it really work. |
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