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Author: | Darrell [ October 25th, 2006, 9:10 am ] |
Post subject: | The World Beyond |
[Here's a poem I cooked up recently. It's not a patch on anything I've written before, and I'm still not sure if I like it or not, but it seemed like a good idea at the time ![]() Over the hill, A shining sun A golden green field Babbling brooks Clear blue lakes. Vast forests, a sea of green. Gold in autumn. Splashes of colour The vibrant paint of a different age! Woodsmoke rises With the sound of laughter. The light patter of feet And joyous eyes. The rustle of the leaves With a drip of rain. And all in the mist beyond, gazing through a clear pane, into a far distant country in a different world. (Edited for minor typos) |
Author: | Seral [ October 26th, 2006, 10:55 am ] |
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-giggles- I like it, le Darrell... and you know what it reminds me of? The tag back when we first started. ^^;; With the shiny autumn leaves, etc... This is like... the perfect poem for that. -nodnodnod- |
Author: | Darrell [ October 26th, 2006, 12:46 pm ] |
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D'you know, I never saw that before. But now you mention it, it does remind me of that. ![]() |
Author: | Seral [ October 26th, 2006, 12:53 pm ] |
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-nodnodnod- That was the first thing I thought of, when I read it. ^^;; I liked this one, as much as the other ones, too... probably because I could identify with it. -twirls- |
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