I like it...it's short & to the point, yet still very powerful....keep it up!
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| Author: | Guest [ November 15th, 2006, 9:07 pm ] |
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Im gone from this life, the torturing has stopped. I can for once, be happy again. The shadow pierced, cant control me, not if I've got the Lord Jesus by me. Not weak anymore, once again strong, nothing can stand in my way... anymore. |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ November 15th, 2006, 10:16 pm ] |
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I like it...it's short & to the point, yet still very powerful....keep it up!
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| Author: | Guest [ November 15th, 2006, 10:19 pm ] |
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I know 'tis short. 
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ November 15th, 2006, 10:37 pm ] |
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I like short poems....idk, 4 sum reason, 2 me, sumtimes they just seem 2 say more, u know? anyways, good job, & keep it up!
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| Author: | Snowbird [ November 16th, 2006, 3:48 pm ] |
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"Nothing can stand in my way... anymore" I loved that part! Great poem, Saphira! |
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| Author: | Guest [ November 16th, 2006, 4:57 pm ] |
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thanks Snowbird.
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