Im gone from this life,
the torturing has stopped.
I can for once,
be happy again.

The shadow pierced,
cant control me,
not if I've got
the Lord Jesus by me.

Not weak anymore,
once again strong,
nothing can stand in my way...
anymore.

I like it...it's short & to the point, yet still very powerful....keep it up!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

I know 'tis short.

I like short poems....idk, 4 sum reason, 2 me, sumtimes they just seem 2 say more, u know? anyways, good job, & keep it up!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

"Nothing can stand in my way... anymore"

I loved that part! Great poem, Saphira!

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More ardent C.S. Lewis fan


Ardent J.R.R. Tolkien Fan

The Hit Man Gentlewoman

As man, He fled from the stones; but woe to those from whose stony hearts God has fled.~St. Augustine

thanks Snowbird.