I wrote this poem when I was relatively young and I don't know whether it's good or not. So I'd like someone elses opinions..
You can be 100%honest =)
so, here's the poem:
When nothing save darkness avails, remember light,
think of the things worth fighting for, they will carry you on,
if all hope is gone, remember me, I’ll be in your heart forever.
When your legs are stricken numb, remember the good things in this world, they will help you walk,
You fall down, your friends will pick you up, the most important thing in this world is love.
It will always be in your heart, it will always pursue you,
even if nought but darkness is left, it will lighten your heart, lift you on your feet, and you, will fight. Love.
You will fight to the end of days for all, that is good in this world, for friendship, and seek victory, not for glory, but for all that is good in this world.
