Hey, that was pretty good. I like the variation in the verse lengths, makes it look more interesting. I've said it before, but you are quite a good writer, and I'm happily surprised to know that you are just as good at poetry.
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| Author: | Luthien of Lorien [ December 21st, 2006, 4:03 pm ] |
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Hey, that was pretty good. I like the variation in the verse lengths, makes it look more interesting. I've said it before, but you are quite a good writer, and I'm happily surprised to know that you are just as good at poetry.
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| Author: | Estë Undómë [ December 21st, 2006, 4:13 pm ] |
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Faaaabulous, as I said before.  I really love it.
Well done. 
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| Author: | Luthien of Lorien [ December 21st, 2006, 4:14 pm ] |
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~*Hermione*~ wrote: Haha, thanks Peach.
I think it reads better with the different line lengths. I only speak the truth! And it certainly does |
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| Author: | elvishjedipirate [ December 23rd, 2006, 2:00 pm ] |
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That's beautiful! I really like the rythym! |
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