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Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ December 26th, 2006, 5:03 pm ] |
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so i told arwen a long time ago that i'd write a poem about time, & i did....& that's as far as i got...then 2 weeks ago i was like oh yea, gotta type that up....& now, after like, oh, idk, 2 months, i'm finally posting it! yay! lol so anyways, let me know wut u think ![]() ![]() Time Time. The Past. Wishing that I, just for a moment, could go back. Could stop myself From saying Those words. could erase that moment forever, so that no one would remember. Could start over. A clean slate; A new page. But I can do no such thing. Time. The Present. Stuck. Not able to go back, Not able to go forward. Simply stuck in time. What is, becomes what was; What will be, becomes what is. The present becomes the past; The future becomes the present. We stand still. But time, goes on. Time. The Future. The unknown. The feared. What will be; What is to come. Will our dreams come true? Or will they be crushed? Will the ones that we care about and love, be here still? Will we still be here? Time. The Past. The Present. The Future. Time. No matter what happens time will always go on. Live life to the fullest. Have no regrets. Because time will stop for no one. One day, one day soon, we won’t be here any longer. You never know when the end will come. So live it Up. You don’t have much Time. |
Author: | Jax Nova [ December 26th, 2006, 6:18 pm ] |
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Awasome! ![]() ![]() I think has egsactily what needs to be said on the subject. And it doesn't go over board but it doesn't seem to leave anything out either. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ December 27th, 2006, 3:51 pm ] |
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thanks ![]() ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ December 28th, 2006, 1:10 am ] |
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I love it!! You made all of the comparisions so well. I also like how you broke up and compared the past, present, and future. Well done. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ December 28th, 2006, 1:05 pm ] |
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thanks! ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ December 28th, 2006, 2:35 pm ] |
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Well, some of the best ideas come over lon periods of time. ![]() |
Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ December 28th, 2006, 4:34 pm ] |
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Very true. ![]() ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ December 28th, 2006, 9:04 pm ] |
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that is very true, Jax ![]() ![]() |
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