Thanks for the comments guys.
And glad you liked it.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 3rd, 2007, 12:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | "The Directions of Life" (G) |
"The Directions of Life" Calling from the east, The winds are blowing. Blowing strong and shrill. Falling from the west, The fire is growing. Growing hotter still. Sweeping from the north, The oceans cry their tears. Crying from the sky. Striking from the south, With the storm comes rolling fears, Rolling right on by. But always from above, His grace is shining down. Shining from His glory. There in all His love, He wears Hi's heavenly crown. That tells the age old story. He's there for everyone, No mater who you are. Now matter what you've done, Or how deep the scar. He is always there! |
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| Author: | Guest [ January 3rd, 2007, 8:31 pm ] |
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wow I loved it it was great.. |
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 4th, 2007, 12:24 am ] |
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Great job. |
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| Author: | Aerandir [ January 4th, 2007, 9:15 am ] |
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That's a really cool poem, Jax. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 4th, 2007, 3:49 pm ] |
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Thanks for the comments guys. And glad you liked it.
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| Author: | Lady Elenriel [ January 4th, 2007, 4:11 pm ] |
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Jax, that's awesome! I love the imagery you used. You expressed your meaning so well. Great job and keep it up! 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 5th, 2007, 2:27 pm ] |
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Thanks.
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ February 2nd, 2007, 9:09 pm ] |
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Beautiful imagery. I love it.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 3rd, 2007, 3:36 pm ] |
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As always glad you liked it.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ February 5th, 2007, 11:53 am ] |
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eek! u've posted like 3 poems that i havent reade! -dies- lol I luv this one! It does a great job of getting the point across....a point that is very true. Keep it up.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 5th, 2007, 2:51 pm ] |
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lol Yeah I posted a bunch lately. glad you liked it as always.
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ February 5th, 2007, 8:24 pm ] |
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I know, I was surprised to see a handful of poems I hadn't read yet. Sorry it took me awhile, Jax. 
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 6th, 2007, 2:39 pm ] |
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lol that's fine. It's not like you guys are obligated to read my poetry. |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ February 6th, 2007, 5:06 pm ] |
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i might as well be. I'm adicted. lol
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ February 6th, 2007, 8:02 pm ] |
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Yep, me too.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 7th, 2007, 3:54 pm ] |
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lol well I always appreciate your guys' comments.
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