Thanks guys.
Glad you liked it.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 22nd, 2007, 1:46 pm ] |
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WELL...... *sighs* after absent mindedly posting this poem in the Misc. Randomness section I will post it where I THOUGHT I was posting it before.... lol *needs more sleep* Well, I don't usually write free verse but that is just how this one turned out. Hope you all like it. Something, Nothing, One thing, Everything. A kaleidoscope of good and evil, That spirals down the banks of the rivers. It turns the waters to blood, And none escape it's claws. Death, Life, Barely living, Barely dead. A haunting image of love and hate, A bleeding image of sorrow cold. But on it's tongue are words so cruel, As it bends down and whispers, "I love You." |
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| Author: | The Nightingale [ January 24th, 2007, 10:18 am ] |
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Whoa... I like that. I don't know what to say about it, though. It's one of those poems that leaves you speechless. |
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| Author: | Mrs. Malfoy [ January 24th, 2007, 12:53 pm ] |
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I completely agree with The Nightingale.....It's beautiful but morbid.....it's amazing! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 24th, 2007, 1:05 pm ] |
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Thanks guys. Glad you liked it.
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| Author: | Guest [ January 31st, 2007, 10:16 pm ] |
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Thats a great poem Jax! It seems so...hmm..dunno how to put it! Mysterious.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 1st, 2007, 6:15 pm ] |
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Thanks. Yeah it is in a way. Basically it kind of depicts how although love can so often be seeen in such a light manner it's not a small ishue at all. And love can often be a horible thing. It's kind of hard to explain... lol |
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ February 2nd, 2007, 9:02 pm ] |
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Great, Jax!! Yes, it is dark and somewhat morbid, but good. Well done.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 3rd, 2007, 3:35 pm ] |
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Thanks.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ February 5th, 2007, 11:57 am ] |
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Perhaps slightly morbid....but i like that about it....& i like how it's free verse....it just makes it, more...idk....perfect.... |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 5th, 2007, 2:41 pm ] |
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Thanks. And as always glad you liked it.
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