This is a rather long poem I just started, it still remains title-less. *sigh* Any ideas?

Long ago
there lived a maiden fair
known to all
by her deep eyes
of glittering blue
and her flowing
glowing red and gold hair
This maiden fair
lived long ago
by starlit, moonlit, sunlit seas
But never did she
look out upon
the glittering waters
For the people whispered
among themselves
a secret true
That Ariel
the maiden fair
the maiden of the red-gold hair
Would never leave
her shrouded solitude
Lest a curse laid on her
years before
would come upon her
Leaving her
to vanish
from the living world
and be lost to it forevermore
Now Ariel,
she spent
her lonely days
gazing, ever gazing
into a mirror
that saw
everything and anything
anywhere and everywhere
But she gazed too far,
she gazed too long
With an eye
much too keen
Probing deep into
the depths
of the darkest darkness
Seeking to see
if she might
turn its course
and bring it
to the light

[That's all I have so far, what do you think of it?]

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"I am he [she =P] that liveth, and was dead; and, behold, I am alive for evermore, Amen; and have the keys of hell and of death."

Its lovely, Arya! Good job.

Ditto, very nicely done.

Sorry, don't really have any ideas for a title. *shrugs*

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hmm..how *about "Maiden Fair" for the title..

Hmm...good idea. If I can't think of anything else, that'll probably fit in w/the poem.

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"I am he [she =P] that liveth, and was dead; and, behold, I am alive for evermore, Amen; and have the keys of hell and of death."