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Author:  Slickman_G [ March 31st, 2007, 2:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Valor?
Hi, im new :)

Wrote this a while ago, see what you think, If you like it i'll post some more!

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Valor?
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Forested caves of a might unfocused.
Fear, or Courage?

White ships fleeing a paradise corrupted.
Fear, or Courage?

A grey man fleeing a black tower, with death awaiting.
Fear, or Courage?

A party of nine, to conquer a tyrant.
Fear, or Courage?

Falling into darkness, out of thought or time.
Fear, or Courage?

A flight to hidden trees and grace.
Fear, or Courage?

Forsaking weapons for trust.
Fear, or Courage?

Riding into the face of fatality to save those below.
Fear, or courage?

Aiding an ally, against hope.
Fear, or Courage?

Standing their ground, facing demise and downfall
Fear, or Courage?

Saving a world, yet remaining humble.
Fear, or Courage?

Sailing to peace, leaving peace.
Fear, or Courage?
Author:  Lady Erana [ March 31st, 2007, 4:18 pm ]
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Wow, that's an awesome poem, congratulations! I really like it! Actually it's quite similar to some of my poems! :P
Author:  Slickman_G [ April 1st, 2007, 6:10 am ]
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Thanks :). I'll post some more soon.
Author:  Slickman_G [ April 1st, 2007, 6:16 am ]
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Here is a couple more Poems I wrote, short and sweet hopefully.

Interpret however you will :)
<center>
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Not What They Seem
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The forests have ears
To catch every word.
The mountains have fears,
That their great might goes unheard.
The statues can feel,
What should not be there.
The walls will heel
If their masters cannot care.

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Elven Joy
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Hey! Be the Elves,
All merry and gay.
Not a care in the world,
At the end of day!

O, ho! There the lords
Be young as Men.
It’s a joy to the soul,
No concern for them!

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Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ April 1st, 2007, 3:04 pm ]
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Good, the rhyme flows very well, yet seems different. I give you a 4.5/5. :-D
Author:  Guest [ April 1st, 2007, 6:44 pm ]
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I like the Elven Joy one. :happy: good job. ;)
Author:  Slickman_G [ April 2nd, 2007, 5:57 am ]
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Thanks for the nice comments :D

A few more: (If you can call them poems :confused: ) <center>

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Melkor
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Thus is the fall of ambitious might.
Until the day casts out the night.

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Arnor
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A fallen nation
Avarice’s deadly blow
Three of one’s glory

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Sméagol
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Crawl into the earth,
Rejected by his own kin
Repentance for death

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Orc Army
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Swarms and crowds as one
A writhing might called for war
The Orc army comes

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Minas Tirith?
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White glory disturbed
Darkness taints the strength of Men
The Eternal fight

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