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| Author: | Renji's Howl [ April 4th, 2007, 4:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Admiral Beau's Lament (PG) |
This is a poem about my freinds horse, Admiral Beau. He die 2 Octobars ago. Please Comment. The barn is abanded, the pastures are empty the young spring fillies have long grown old. The grass withers as the wind roles by: a voice so solf and sad it cries. And under the trees, the old apple tree there stands a wood cross of our greatest loss for he has faded into the mist of Autumn’s snow-white Winter shift. |
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| Author: | Renji's Howl [ April 7th, 2007, 12:10 pm ] |
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Anyone going to comment? |
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| Author: | Risestel [ April 7th, 2007, 3:35 pm ] |
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I like the poem. Very solemn. |
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| Author: | SynysterFreak23 [ April 26th, 2007, 4:27 pm ] |
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I loved the poem. Bravo, very good job, Murtagh. |
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| Author: | Dark, Queen of Angmar [ April 27th, 2007, 5:27 pm ] |
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gorgeous, very well written, and im sorry for your loss. |
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| Author: | Lasbelingur [ April 29th, 2007, 1:29 am ] |
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Ohh, that's so sad!!! I love horsys and to think another one died... |
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| Author: | Renji's Howl [ April 29th, 2007, 6:12 pm ] |
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thanks guys. Beau broke his leg and my friends had to put him down, he was only 26. |
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| Author: | The Nightingale [ April 30th, 2007, 12:13 pm ] |
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I know what it's like to have an animal put down. My cat wasn't actually put down, but for the longest time we were preparing to... but then we ended up not having to. Beautiful poem. |
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