Very interesting. It's well written.
Nice work.
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| Author: | Guest [ April 7th, 2007, 5:15 pm ] |
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I was considering whether or not to post this....but, anyways.. Blood Runnin' through my flesh, drippin' on my skin, so very deep that it must mean something. Red as the rose, lonely as the desert, bitter-tasting as being Alone, this fate called Blood. The very words tingling my spine. Oh seems so afraid, so lonely, so shy, such a different color. Blood. Unquenching, dry's the throat, staining my skin, till I'm all as red as it. Its the Fear you've know for so long. Its the taste you hated, the color you despised, now you're starting to realize; was I wrong? Its just Blood. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 8th, 2007, 1:06 pm ] |
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Very interesting. It's well written. Nice work.
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| Author: | Guest [ April 8th, 2007, 2:10 pm ] |
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Thanks. lol..I thought it wasnt my best...but I suppose minds differ, eh? 
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