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Author:  Guest [ April 9th, 2007, 8:12 pm ]
Post subject:  A Chance. [G]
<center>Do you know
how it feels to be hated?
Do you know how it feels
to be mistreated?
Do you know the feel
of loneliness...a quiet
abyess in which I lye.

I feel so many
emotions at once.
Suffocating me till
I have to give in.
This isn't the way its
supposed to be. It
shouldn't be so
complicated , too
hard to figure out.
I feel my head
searching for
the answers, they
seem so hidden to
me, as if they can
never be found.
What will happen
when I come to a dead end?
Trapped between these
choices, I'm not sure
which path to take:
They both read
'Unfortunates Lies
Within'

I'm cornered now.
Every way is too
hard, my life
was a mess since
the beginning....
why can't fortune
smile upon me?
Once.
Just Once.

I've walked alone
so many times. No
company to cheer
me up....no one
can cheer me up now.
I'm in a distastful swarm,
full of lies and conceit,
no one to rescue me.
No one wants to.

My fate ending Now.
Why has life failed me?
I don't want to end this
way....not now. Not yet.
No, not yet.
Just Now.

My tears invisble,
no one understanding me,
why....why was this life
given to me?

I want to choose a new
one. A chance to start
over
again.
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 10th, 2007, 10:49 am ]
Post subject: 
Hey, nice write. Very emotional and sad but wel writen.

I know you don't believe in God, but I used to feel exactily like that... But God pulled me out so I can kind of relate a bit. It's amazing what He did for me and now I have not felt like that in a logntime.
Author:  Guest [ April 10th, 2007, 11:00 am ]
Post subject: 
Oh I do believe in God...^_^ very much indeed...:D

haha..my inspiration for the Poem started out with Murtagh...xD
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 10th, 2007, 11:02 am ]
Post subject: 
oh really, I apologize I thought you said differently tht must have ben some one else.

i see, that's interesting. Well, nice write. :)
Author:  Risestel [ April 14th, 2007, 5:04 pm ]
Post subject: 
Thats really sad.
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