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Author:  Jax Nova [ April 11th, 2007, 11:03 am ]
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You came to me in a dream last night,
Promised me it would be alright.
But now in the day I've lost my sight,
And I'm crying tears for you.

I called but you never answered me,
I looked but your face I could not see,
I thought you said you would set me free,
Now what do I do?

I want a way to call you,
To tell you how I feel.
But I don't even know you,
Are you even real?

I need another night to sleep,
So your memory I can keep.
But I guess what you sew you'll reap,
And now I'm alone without you.

We laughed and we played last night,
Side by side we would fight.
But now your gone with rising light,
Now what do I do.

I want a way to see you,
To hear your voice again.
But I can't even find you,
just a feeling deep within.

Maybe your not even real.
Maybe I made you in my mind.
In desperate attempts to feel,
i had a friend so kind.

But I'll never forget you,
Who ever you are.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ April 13th, 2007, 5:38 pm ]
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ooh, i like this one....i can...relate, in a way....(as usual, with ur poems....lol) any particular inspirtion for this one? (if u dont mind me asking....) i rlly liked it. keep it up.
Author:  Risestel [ April 13th, 2007, 7:43 pm ]
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That was amazing. Nice job.
Author:  bow_and_arrow [ April 16th, 2007, 3:02 am ]
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That's lovely - well written :-D
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 16th, 2007, 11:55 am ]
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pip&leggyluvr wrote:
ooh, i like this one....i can...relate, in a way....(as usual, with ur poems....lol) any particular inspirtion for this one? (if u dont mind me asking....) i rlly liked it. keep it up.


lol yeah. :) I am glad you can relate though it not only seems to help you sometimes but it helps me to know I am not alone in my emotions. lol


But actually my inspiration for this one was a dream I had. It's kind of funny because I was starting to get depressed, then I had this dream that made me even more depressed and then I ended up writting this because of the dream and then... wrotting this seemed to pull me out of all my depression. lol so it was kind of interesting.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ April 18th, 2007, 8:49 pm ]
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i know how that is....writing can pull u out of depression....& even more so, posting it on here & having ppl go "oh i ttly know wut u mean..." it helps like SO much. lol or @ least, 4 me it does. :hug: i'm sry u had 2 go through that, but u'll get through. God will always find a way! :]
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 19th, 2007, 10:34 am ]
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Yes, it does help. To write and to have people able to relate. :) :hug:

Tahnks, I knwo God will always be with me to get me through every hard time in my life, I have nothign to worry about when I am safe in His hands.
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ April 24th, 2007, 6:21 pm ]
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I love it, as usual. :) And I can also relate. I've actually had dreams like that before. Very good, as always, Jax. :hug:
Author:  Jax Nova [ April 25th, 2007, 10:34 am ]
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Thanks. :) Glad you liked it as always and thanks for the comment.

It was kind of a wierd dream really but the poem came out of it so I guess it was a good thing. lol
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