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Author: | Slickman_G [ April 14th, 2007, 4:16 am ] |
Post subject: | ~ Requiem for Gondor's Son ~ (PG) (No. III added) |
I've written a small series of poems 'inspired' by the death of Boromir.....i'll post the next one tommorow most probably ![]() <center>~ I. Whispers ~ by Slickman_G based on a poem by J. R. R. Tolkien 'Through woods and fields without a rest your rushing waters flow, through sunlit dales you find your way beneath the mountains' snow. What tidings bear your waters here, o Anduin the Great? What news you carry of my lord? What whispers of his fate?' 'Sad are the news I bring to you from ancient Amon Hen for Boromir I bore away upon my shoulders then. I bear to you his dying words, the warmth of his last breath, he stumbled but he still stood tall and died a hero's death.' 'O Boromir! I stand and mourn beneath the weeping skies while Anduin does mirror still the light inside your eyes.' ~ II. Lost ~ by Slickman_G Will you never come back to the light? Will you stay far away in the night while your horn's cry is haunting my dreams? In it's call rings despair as it screams Close my eyes it is you that I see lying there pale like death while I'm free waters bear you away far from here in my heart torn apart nameless fear In a dark valley lost hear my cry must I lose you and live as you die? The White Tower turns dark as I mourn as I cry Gondor's banner lies torn silver trumpets once clear scream in pain for the lord of their hope, he lies slain Will your voice ever torment my mind? Will I stumble as tears leave me blind? And I fall, when will I reach the ground? lie there broken and lost, never found in this uttermost pain never known You are dying and I'm left alone...</center> Comments please? |
Author: | JC802 [ April 14th, 2007, 9:05 am ] |
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WOW!!! you are a great poet!! those are AMAZING poems!! |
Author: | mephiston, lord of death [ April 14th, 2007, 9:56 pm ] |
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Those poems are excellent. Very moving and exceptionally well written. I commend you. |
Author: | Slickman_G [ April 15th, 2007, 5:55 am ] |
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Thanks! ![]() Here's the third section, bringing out my sensitive side ![]() <center>~ III. Confession ~ by Slickman_G Dead silence all around and I can cry no more lie broken on the ground I feel my heart is sore from grief that's violence from mourning agony from painful impotence to hold you here with me Their mournful Requiem won't reach my deafened ear where numb indifference replaced the unknown fear I'm dead although I live blind, dark in light of day the comfort that they give feels cold, so far away The life that's left to me is none but endless fall a fading memory a long diminished call a nightmare without dawn my trembling fingers trace the softness of your lips the lines of your fair face I'm lost in your dark eyes the warmth of your soft breath their promises are lies illusions turned to death And bleeding I confess how much I craved this bliss I longed for your caress in death I crave your kiss</center> |
Author: | JC802 [ April 15th, 2007, 9:05 pm ] |
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I adore the third part!!! very well written! |
Author: | bow_and_arrow [ April 16th, 2007, 2:57 am ] |
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Slickman, you are such an amazing poet! I love them all! ![]() |
Author: | Slickman_G [ April 16th, 2007, 2:13 pm ] |
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Thanks for the kind comments! ![]() No. IV comming soon... |
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