okay... how can you post three poems... and there's only a minute between the posting times?

One was posted at 10:36, next one at 10:37, and this one at 10:38...

Did you already have these somewhere else? Or are they just off the top of your head and written down within a minute?

There's a little meaning to all three of them... but they seem sloppy, and missing stuff. It all seems too short! And I had a literature teacher say "Where you place your lines, makes all the difference" Try making some of your lines shorter...

And also, try to make your poems longer, so the readers can completely get the situation of the whole thing it's about!

And try to take more time on writing them! When I write a poem, the words I'm going to write down go through my head all day, and I write things down, and figure out what ryms with what on another section...

For a good example check out any of Jax Nova's work, he's even got a book out! You can find his work all over The Hall of Fire.

Other than that... It's good! Just needs a little work! lol!
(hope you don't mind me being critical... but that's what some writer's need)

Oh, and one last not, you might want to try using spell check on all three of your poems! I won't try to fix the spelling errors, 'cause I myself am really bad at spelling!