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Post subject: Angel  Posted: May 13th, 2007, 11:15 am |
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This poem is fine for all ages...I hope...
Angel of Fire
Joy and Desire
Daughter of Dreams
Of Rivers and Streams
Lady of Trees
Of Flowers and Bees
Maiden of Breezes
Of the Wind That Teases
Children of Nature
Ladies of the Earth
Angels watching over us
May we learn what we are worth.
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Post subject: Posted: May 13th, 2007, 1:08 pm |
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I like it.It's cool indeed!
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Post subject: Posted: May 15th, 2007, 7:28 am |
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that is a good poem! Well done!
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Post subject: Posted: May 15th, 2007, 7:16 pm |
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Thanks, you guys!!! I'm glad you like it... Any criticisim(sp?)???
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Post subject: Posted: May 16th, 2007, 2:38 pm |
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None what so ever(sp?)!!!!
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Post subject: Posted: May 21st, 2007, 7:37 pm |
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um... Children of Nature doesn't really seem to fit in to it all... like, it doesn't ryme with anything else in the poem... and like... the next line it says 'Ladies of the Earth' so they go from Children to Ladies... okay... so, yeah! There's some criticisim for you, mystics! lol!
Other than that, it's awesome! lol! Simply delightful!
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Post subject: Posted: May 22nd, 2007, 4:01 pm |
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Erurania-It's not actually supposed to rhyme except for in the first eight lines...^_^
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Post subject: Posted: May 22nd, 2007, 6:00 pm |
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Then I don't have any proper criticisim for you! lol!
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Post subject: Posted: May 24th, 2007, 7:51 pm |
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lol!!!
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