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| Author: | Lady Dovasary [ May 13th, 2007, 11:15 am ] |
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This poem is fine for all ages...I hope... Angel of Fire Joy and Desire Daughter of Dreams Of Rivers and Streams Lady of Trees Of Flowers and Bees Maiden of Breezes Of the Wind That Teases Children of Nature Ladies of the Earth Angels watching over us May we learn what we are worth. |-MysticsAngel |
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| Author: | Elenthari [ May 13th, 2007, 1:08 pm ] |
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I like it.It's cool indeed! |
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| Author: | Risestel [ May 15th, 2007, 7:28 am ] |
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that is a good poem! Well done! |
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| Author: | Lady Dovasary [ May 15th, 2007, 7:16 pm ] |
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Thanks, you guys!!! I'm glad you like it... Any criticisim(sp?)??? |
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| Author: | Lasbelingur [ May 16th, 2007, 2:38 pm ] |
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None what so ever(sp?)!!!! |
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| Author: | Eruraina [ May 21st, 2007, 7:37 pm ] |
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um... Children of Nature doesn't really seem to fit in to it all... like, it doesn't ryme with anything else in the poem... and like... the next line it says 'Ladies of the Earth' so they go from Children to Ladies... okay... so, yeah! There's some criticisim for you, mystics! lol! Other than that, it's awesome! lol! Simply delightful! |
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| Author: | Lady Dovasary [ May 22nd, 2007, 4:01 pm ] |
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Erurania-It's not actually supposed to rhyme except for in the first eight lines...^_^ |
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| Author: | Eruraina [ May 22nd, 2007, 6:00 pm ] |
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Then I don't have any proper criticisim for you! lol! |
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| Author: | Lady Dovasary [ May 24th, 2007, 7:51 pm ] |
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lol!!! |
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