Very lovely and sweet Eruraina, not only that but so very very true!
I really liked the wording you used in there and how you got the message across, the ending was very nice as well when you revealed who your heor was.
excelent job.
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| Author: | Eruraina [ May 23rd, 2007, 2:08 pm ] |
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A hero is not just a man in a cape Nor some super human being. A hero doesn't always save, Those who need saving. A hero is honest and wise. Someone who comforts, And never lies. And will confront The evil inside. A hero will stand up For the little guys, And doesn't fight the big bad guys, But the little every day evils. A hero is someone who I'd gladly say Has saved my life any day. Who I love, and who loves me back, Is the the hero, that I do not lack. A hero in my eyes Is someone who loves me no mater what, Is someone who is kind, Ane will stab evil in the gut. My hero is always there, She is my mother. And I know she will always care. For I love her. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ May 24th, 2007, 12:27 pm ] |
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Very lovely and sweet Eruraina, not only that but so very very true! I really liked the wording you used in there and how you got the message across, the ending was very nice as well when you revealed who your heor was. excelent job.
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| Author: | Eruraina [ May 24th, 2007, 2:21 pm ] |
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Thanks Jax! I plan to recite it to my mom one of these days! lol! |
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