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Author:  Envied Alexander [ June 3rd, 2007, 5:04 pm ]
Post subject:  A Childhood Not Wanting

Ok, please be nice.

I've embarked on a piratical adventure into what is known as my first attempt and a Pirates fanfiction. Please follow the link and, if you're nice, leave me a review!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3571573/1/

Thankies Bunchies!

-Turner

Author:  Dark, Queen of Angmar [ June 6th, 2007, 9:19 pm ]
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*ish reading*

ooh, very nice!

This time, Teague sighed, “It’s an animal some people eat, son. They make pearls.”

“The people or the oyster?” Jack asked curiously.

^ *dies of laughter* thats great!
so cute and Jack like!

very nice, you have a good start so far!

Author:  Envied Alexander [ June 6th, 2007, 10:07 pm ]
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hehe, thankies. I'm trying to keep both of them as close to character as I can, while giving them one of those precious father-son relationships but not meddling with the relationship shown in P3. It's great to know Jack sounds good an' Jack like.

^I hope that makes sense.

EDIT: I just updated the story with "The Dingy"

Author:  Dark, Queen of Angmar [ June 8th, 2007, 3:32 pm ]
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aww, very cute, and love how your tying in his present adventures with each chapter, its a nice touch that ive never come across before, *applauds*

Author:  Envied Alexander [ June 8th, 2007, 4:06 pm ]
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Thanks very much!

I'm sad to say it's on hold for now. I've temporarily run out of ideas and lost my list of ideas I had planned out.

Any help?

Author:  Dark, Queen of Angmar [ June 10th, 2007, 1:26 pm ]
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umm... *thinks*... near death experiences?... maybe a run in with a younr Barbossa or soemthing? *shrugs* bone-dry over here.

Author:  Envied Alexander [ June 10th, 2007, 3:56 pm ]
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Well, I know I want to do something with him stealing a sip of rum from Teague, and I definately would like something with freedom.

I was also thinking of a chapter about keys. That unlock things. *lol*

Author:  Dark, Queen of Angmar [ June 16th, 2007, 12:45 pm ]
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Those would be really neat... *waits for next chapters*

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