oh i rlly like this! nicely done! luv the subject & rhyming & everything. keep it up!
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ August 7th, 2007, 4:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Your Hazel Eyes |
It was a dark, stormy time, Before I saw your hazel eyes, It was a crime, before my cries, That I was ever denied The sight of your hazel eyes. You just walked in, crashed in my mind, Then I saw your hazel eyes, I left love behind, like he who denies, But then you came, Then I saw your hazel eyes. Then you left, without a goodbye, After I saw your hazel eyes, Now I almost cry, whenever my roving mind espies, Whenever I think of you, After I saw your hazel eyes. |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ August 7th, 2007, 5:26 pm ] |
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oh i rlly like this! nicely done! luv the subject & rhyming & everything. keep it up!
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