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Author:  Jax Nova [ August 20th, 2007, 11:52 am ]
Post subject:  This life
Well, this one is a bit different that my normal so, take a look and let me know what you think. thnx. *waves*



It's not about me,
It's not about you.
I just want to feel free,
I want something new.

This life does not hold,
Any pleasure within.
It's routs are so old,
I do run them again and again.

I want something fun,
But something helpful as well.
Where there's something to be done,
And when it's done you can tell.

I want something meaningful,
A life with some reason.
But here life's so dull,
From season to season.

So I'll wait for the day,
That life will renew.
I'll wait to hear You say,
"Here, this life is for you."
Author:  Inwe Calaelen [ August 21st, 2007, 2:19 pm ]
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Oh! I really really like it! It flows. *High fives*
Nice work.
Author:  Jax Nova [ August 23rd, 2007, 11:27 am ]
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Thanks, :) Glad you liked it.

And thanks for the comment as always.
Author:  Eruraina [ September 10th, 2007, 6:53 pm ]
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I love it!

"Here, this life is for you, Jax" lol!
Author:  Jax Nova [ September 11th, 2007, 1:50 pm ]
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Thanks. :) Glad you liked it and as always appreciate the comment.
Author:  FRODOFAN [ September 12th, 2007, 8:53 pm ]
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I think I prefer your usuals, but it's not bad.

It almost sounds like something someone might say to break up with someone. :P But I know this feeling.
Author:  Jax Nova [ September 13th, 2007, 11:35 am ]
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Yeah, I personally didn't think it fit to well either to be honest. But thanks for the impute appreciate it always. :)
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 26th, 2007, 8:46 am ]
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Nice one. I know that feeling... it has a nice flow.
Author:  Jax Nova [ September 28th, 2007, 11:25 am ]
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Yeah, not the best feeling is it? lol


But then again trials make us strong. :)
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 28th, 2007, 4:50 pm ]
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Very true. :)

Nice job again.
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