Interesting piece. I like the images!
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ September 10th, 2007, 12:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Life and Death |
Blue skies are falling, There before your eyes. Crystal forests dying, As the whirling wind cries. The marble moon is falling, From it's orbit in the skies. Stars are slowly dying, As the ocean wails and cries. But rubies are appearing, In the sky above. New born babies are now hearing, The words of Mother's love. Sparkling crystals showing, In the river's tide. Glass trees are growing, On the mountainside. Though death is all around, Life is there to see. Portrayed in every sound, Seen in you and me. So chose your focus with discernment, Life or be it death. For our focus can determine, Our each and every breath. |
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| Author: | Eruraina [ September 10th, 2007, 6:49 pm ] |
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I love it Jax! That's deep! I love your poetry... it's so smooth! What was the insperation for this one? |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ September 11th, 2007, 1:53 pm ] |
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Thank you. Funny thing is I usually think my poetry isn't smooth enough... lol Really, I was just messing around on the computer and suddenly I felt like writing a poem. So I kinda just started writing and this is what came out. *shrugs* |
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| Author: | FRODOFAN [ September 12th, 2007, 8:52 pm ] |
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Interesting piece. I like the images!
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ September 13th, 2007, 11:38 am ] |
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Thanks. Appreciate the comment once again.
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| Author: | Bubble Black [ September 18th, 2007, 4:25 pm ] |
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Wow. That's a really deep and meaningful poem. And I agree, it is also written very smoothly. |
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| Author: | Eruraina [ September 18th, 2007, 5:27 pm ] |
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Even though I've already commented on this peom, I'd have to say... it brings a new meaning to me suddenly because about a half our ago I was in a car crash... no body died, good thing. But it was scary... So, yeah, that poem has a new meaning, thanks Jax for writing it! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ September 19th, 2007, 11:42 am ] |
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Thanks for the comments guys. Always appreciate it. I heard about the crash, I will pray for you and the other's involved.
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ September 26th, 2007, 8:41 am ] |
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Awesome job again, Jax!! I really love this one- it flows so smoothly, and the images are amazing. It is really deep.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ September 28th, 2007, 11:23 am ] |
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Thanks, glad you liked it as always. I tried to put some good imagry in there so Iam pleased that people have mentioned that, it means I actually made it close to what I wanted. lol |
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